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Common sense things to ease your journey

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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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The child with his belly laugh is a good way to start. Your suggestions for a relationship are very wise and offer the best hope for a long-lasting relationship with the person you are married to. Treating friends and family with the same respect makes for good relationships as well.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
    Thank you so much:-)
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Well, I've agree with about everyone of your lines for life until this last one. "Always remember you are unique. Just like everyone else." To that last line, I said, everyone likes to think they are unique, but in reality, there isn't really that much difference between one of us than the other. And what little differences there are: "don't amount to a hill of beans." LOL. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
    That line just cracks me up. The original quote was "We are all unique. I just jazzed it up a bit.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
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Thank you. More good ones.
USE YOUR TURN SIGNALS!!!!! And if you are using your transmission to stop (or slow down), touch your brake pedal as well, giving notice to drivers behind you.
Best wishes.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
    I will probably add that one. Thanks ever so much. Karen
Comment from Bill Schott
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Rules 121 - 132 are really stressing this idea of picking up after myself. Is this series really aimed at just me, and everyone else is waiting for me to figure that out?

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
    I will never tell a well guarded secret:-)
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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This is another excellent poem with valuable insight. I literally said some of this to my husband, today. You use descriptive words and colorful imagery that will draw in a readers. Many will relate. You should compile these into a book, if you haven't yet.

Best wishes friend,

Alexandra :))



 Comment Written 17-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
    I have added all but this one, and I can't add it until the contest is over. I have a book!!!!!!!:-)
Comment from Wendyanne
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Your free verse poem contains some very good advice especially for newly weds or couples who are engaged. Marriage should be a lifetime commitment and it can be very hard work. Love this "Don't laugh at other people's mistakes, or if you do, at least cough or clear your throat to cover it up!" Good luck!

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
    Thanks for the read and kind words. right now, my wifi is hinky, but you are on my list for a review. Karen
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Nicely done! I like the way you've incorporated your rules for life into this free verse form. There are some really profound lines here, making this a joy to read. Thanks for sharing and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
    I decided more people might read if I entered it.
    And, I think everyone can find some truth in these little nuggets. Karen
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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You already know I enjoy reading this. Thank you for taking time to post it.

Trust is the most important part of a marriage.

Have date nights. My husband and I have been married 46 years; we still have a date night every Friday.)

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
    I am so happy for you. You know what is important. Thanks for the read and the kind words. Karen