Poetry Abuse
Meter, rhyme and spelling errors ~ Intentional51 total reviews
Comment from Lisasview
Fabulous ...wonderful poem... So well written... so clear... Loved it...
I can see why you got first place for this short poem dearest Debi....
Lisa, now reviewing like crazy...
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
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Fabulous ...wonderful poem... So well written... so clear... Loved it...
I can see why you got first place for this short poem dearest Debi....
Lisa, now reviewing like crazy...
Comment Written 27-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
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Thanks Lisa for reviewing and commenting on my silly poetry abuse poem. It was actually harder trying to make mistakes. Lol. Thanks again.
Comment from Aiona
Heh! I love poems that rhyme and make me giggle. This one fits the bill. I like how you incorporated the mistakes into the poetry as a demonstration. It's very poetic!
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023
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Heh! I love poems that rhyme and make me giggle. This one fits the bill. I like how you incorporated the mistakes into the poetry as a demonstration. It's very poetic!
Comment Written 09-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023
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Hi Aiona, I truly appreciate all the kind words for my silly poem..
It is fun to do fun and crazy sometimes! Lol.
Thanks again, my awesome friend.
Debi
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
You made me smile. Congratulations on the your win. I loved your many intentional mistakes. I think my poetry has been in a drought lately, too.
I hope you have a happy day!
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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You made me smile. Congratulations on the your win. I loved your many intentional mistakes. I think my poetry has been in a drought lately, too.
I hope you have a happy day!
Comment Written 20-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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Oh this is done? I thought it was a couple more days. Lol, I havent' even looked at my pm's so I just got here. I am pasting your poem in my Treasures Folder so that I can always look at it to make me smile.
Thank you for your kind comments and I am so happy everyone seemed to like this silly one. Lol, it was actually hard to allow myself to make those mistakes, especially the meter being so bad. LOL..thanks again for yesterday too. You were part of the reason it was the best birthday ever!
Love you with all my heart!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute and very well written rhyming poem with great humor in your spelling! The artwork and your words go great with this contest entry. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023
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This is a very cute and very well written rhyming poem with great humor in your spelling! The artwork and your words go great with this contest entry. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 19-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023
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Hi Ter, thanks for the awesome review and the kind comments. It was a fun poem to do, but actually harder to purposely bad. Lol, thanks again, dear friend.
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You are so welcome! You did a great job on this!!!😊💕❤️
Comment from nomi338
File a motion, call the police, send out a all points bulletin. Then be prepared to be embarrassed when your muse returns and wonders what all the fuss was about. Please do remember, most of us here on FanStory suffer an occasional bout of abuse by our muse. The great news is you will survive it. Take a vacation while the muse is gone and work him/her hard when he/she returns. Revenge is sweet.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023
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File a motion, call the police, send out a all points bulletin. Then be prepared to be embarrassed when your muse returns and wonders what all the fuss was about. Please do remember, most of us here on FanStory suffer an occasional bout of abuse by our muse. The great news is you will survive it. Take a vacation while the muse is gone and work him/her hard when he/she returns. Revenge is sweet.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023
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Lol, Nomi you are so funny! Actually all was working too well or I wouldn't have been able to pull this off so well. So I love tho that everyone can relate and has those days. Thanks my dear friend for your fun comments!
Comment from royowen
It's a terrible thing when one's muse goes walkabout, and one can't think of a suitable rhyming word, and then, of course, one's ability to spell has likewise gone missing, beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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It's a terrible thing when one's muse goes walkabout, and one can't think of a suitable rhyming word, and then, of course, one's ability to spell has likewise gone missing, beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 18-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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Hahaha! I hope I was that convincing Roy, because it was a little bit hard to not correct my own mistakes, so I could see why others were tempted. I think the hardest for me was coming up with a line where the meter would be so far off. Thanks for the awesome review and comments about my fun and terribly written poem, dear friend.
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Most welcome
Comment from rama devi
This is hilarious and would win a contest if it were about making mistakes in meter, etc. Great humor here. It made me chuckle more than once. The presentation is delightful too with that confused comic image!
It actual has a good beat in spite of intentional flaws...overall.
I'm not sure if the contest judges will accept the intention since the prompt does not require it, but readers like me will certainly feel entertained.
Warmly,
rd
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023
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This is hilarious and would win a contest if it were about making mistakes in meter, etc. Great humor here. It made me chuckle more than once. The presentation is delightful too with that confused comic image!
It actual has a good beat in spite of intentional flaws...overall.
I'm not sure if the contest judges will accept the intention since the prompt does not require it, but readers like me will certainly feel entertained.
Warmly,
rd
Comment Written 18-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023
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Hi Rama, thanks for the awesome review and the kind comments. It was a fun poem to do, but actually harder to purposely make mistakes. Lol, thanks again, dear friend.
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:-)))
Comment from Boogienights
This is so clever. I wish I had thought of it, but I think my muse is also on vacation. Most of my poetry writing problems come from meter and rhythm. Best of luck in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023
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This is so clever. I wish I had thought of it, but I think my muse is also on vacation. Most of my poetry writing problems come from meter and rhythm. Best of luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 18-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023
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Hi Sharon, thanks for the awesome review and the kind comments. It was a fun poem to do, but actually harder to purposely make mistakes. Lol, thanks again, dear friend.
Comment from Sanku
It was a fun read and I must confessI don't have much knowledge of meter or rhyme, though I enjoy reading rhymed poems.all the best for the contest..
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023
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It was a fun read and I must confessI don't have much knowledge of meter or rhyme, though I enjoy reading rhymed poems.all the best for the contest..
Comment Written 18-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023
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Hi Santha, thanks for the awesome review and the kind comments. It was a fun poem to do, but actually harder to purposely make mistakes. Lol, thanks again, dear friend.
Comment from Ginda Simpson
I love your sense of humor and how you incorporated it so successfully into this poem about poems. Each of us has felt this way, more than once, but we keep on, putting pen to paper and that is what makes us succeed in the end. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023
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I love your sense of humor and how you incorporated it so successfully into this poem about poems. Each of us has felt this way, more than once, but we keep on, putting pen to paper and that is what makes us succeed in the end. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023
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HiGinda, thanks for the awesome review and the kind comments. It was a fun poem to do, but actually harder to purposely make mistakes. Lol, thanks again, dear friend. '
