Sloving Poem Problems
Follow the formula and you will achieve success.2 total reviews
Comment from lancellot
This is nice and it shows the problems with writing in general that everyone on the site can relate with. Your syllable count of nine in each line is spot on. I would suggest a more constant rhyme scheme, but this is a good entry.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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This is nice and it shows the problems with writing in general that everyone on the site can relate with. Your syllable count of nine in each line is spot on. I would suggest a more constant rhyme scheme, but this is a good entry.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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Did not try to rhyme, but a good thought. I will look it over again. Thanks for the read and feedback.
Comment from donette1914
love your photo and the way you write
very well written that touches ones heart. Your words flow so smoothly as you made this piece come to life.
Thank you for sharing it was a honor to read your work
and all the hard work you put into this
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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love your photo and the way you write
very well written that touches ones heart. Your words flow so smoothly as you made this piece come to life.
Thank you for sharing it was a honor to read your work
and all the hard work you put into this
Comment Written 16-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the read and providing encouraging feedback.
