Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

how about using the title for the 7th rainbow colour? lol

anyway, love this rainbow busso
smooth flow of words (and colours) and good imagery -
and the black and white pic at the bottom was a great add!

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023

I tried to color the title, it doesn't work. BTW how do you insert lines in the club events? I don't want to write everything in one huge sentence. Do I make sense?

Thank you, Shelley. I appreciate your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I like that the narrator keeps the beloved close a bit longer but embracing the "warm side of the bed" where his scent and warmth still lingers even though he had to leave.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023

.I appreciate your insightful review and helpful feedback. (*÷*) may you have a wonderful day.

Marival

Comment from Debi Pick Marquette

Excellent

OMGosh you have such a lovely way to make even a flower romanticized.
I would love to get into your head for a little bit and hear your thoughts and feel your feelings. I know that sounds weird, but I am such a visual person, that I have a hard time making something out of something else. I am in awe of your beautiful thoughts, beautiful art and font. You just simply amaze me, and this may seem hard to believe, but I saved too many things for today and have only one sixes left that has been promised out already. Too many people doing amazing things today. Absolutely stunning poem,, Gypsy. I love it!!

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023

Hello, Debi, I am a visual person too, that is why I love Japanese poetry so much, it's all based on visual imagery. You will see in the club. Thank you very much for the wonderful review and kind words. Have a fabulous day.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from aryr

Excellent

Bussokusekika was a beautiful poem, Gypsy. When the sun sets their is the truth which the sun setting is prepared to go through. The picture was beautiful, the dual pictures were fantastic. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023

Thank you very much for the wonderful review and kind words. Have a fabulous day. blessed be.

Gypsy hugs

reply by aryr on 15-Oct-2023

Most welcome, Gypsy.

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

I could feel the longing and the deep rooted love throughout this beautiful poem. I love the imagery but the line about cocooning on his warm side of the bed sent shivers. Such an intimate thing. Gretchen

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023

Gretchen, thank you very much for the wonderful review and kind words. Have a fabulous day.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this beautiful artwork and poem with us. I guess he leaves when the sun rises, hmm. I am wondering why? Going to work or something else. The bed is warm, so it wasn't a dream.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023

it's sunset... at night bloodroot flowers close up.

Thank you very much for the wonderful review and kind words. Have a fabulous day.

Gypsy hugs