Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 1-6-1 poem, Fangs, has the proper formatting, though I don't think the assonance rhyming of caught is a good choice for such a short poem.........................

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023

Thanks, Bill. I had hoped to still keep the essence.

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

This is an excellent 1-6-1 poem, and a wee bit scary, love the rhyme words so very descriptive, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023

Thank you, Kahpot!