Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Excellent entry for the 1-6-1 poetry writing prompt contest.

I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize. good rhymes.

My favorite in the contest booth.

Good syllables count and connection between lines.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023

Thank you, Gypsy. As always, I appreciate your reviews and look forward to your insightful quotes. John

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This1-6-1, Senseless Wars, has the proper formatting and finds the world once again seeing so much grief caused by population willing to kill for no legitimate reason.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023

You're right. There's no way a reasonable person can process what's in the twisted mind of such evil people. We can only pray for justice in this world or the next. Thank you for your review.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Grief takes its toll and we try to carry on and stay strong and maintain our song, but the grief never really goes away, a poignant post for the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023

Thanks, Dolly. Your right, some things will stay with us forever. All we have to cling to is our faith. I appreciate your review. God bless.