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Following in MotherĂ¢??s footsteps
3 total reviews
Comment from
pome lover
That's pretty funny. You kept the reader wondering what business she couldn't keep going until the very end, and then -- oops! surprise! Cute story.
Katharine
Comment Written 15-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
Comment from
gramalot8
Lol ... ha ha ha. I loved it! I was wondering the whole time what kind of business your Mom left that you we're failing so badly to continue!
Guess your Mom wasn't explicit enough in teaching you all the ins and outs of the job! Great humor. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
Comment from
BenThrone
Well, you know what they say about best laid plans. It would be a shame to see such a fine mom-and-pop business go down.
I could go on but probably shouldn't lol. This actually made me chuckle which is more than I can say for any of the other entries I've read for this contest.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2023
Thanks Ben. So glad you like my humor.
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