...But...You Could Have
(The Last Laugh)24 total reviews
Comment from Boogienights
Hilarious! Your character certainly gets the best of the manager in this creative tale. I couldn't stop laughing, I can see why it won. Congratulations and thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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Hilarious! Your character certainly gets the best of the manager in this creative tale. I couldn't stop laughing, I can see why it won. Congratulations and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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Hi, Boogie! Thank you so very much for this great review! So happy it gave you a good laugh... It was quite fun to put together this little old lady joke into poetic form! Thank you again and have a lovely evening!
Comment from Anne B Francis
This was so funny and I had a good laugh
Pay back time in full.
Usually it's that kind of answer when in bed and you say oh why didn't I think of that at the time
Next month 23rd I will be 85 join me in a glass. Oh forgot not allowed drink maybe have a night in a hotel and enjoy all the luxurious things they have to offer and think of you
Brilliant write ð???ð??½
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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This was so funny and I had a good laugh
Pay back time in full.
Usually it's that kind of answer when in bed and you say oh why didn't I think of that at the time
Next month 23rd I will be 85 join me in a glass. Oh forgot not allowed drink maybe have a night in a hotel and enjoy all the luxurious things they have to offer and think of you
Brilliant write ð???ð??½
Comment Written 18-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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A very special early HAPPY 85th BIRTHDAY wishes to you, Ms. Anne! And thank you so very much for the absolutely wonderful review! I am so happy this gave you a good laugh... So much fun to write! Thank you again and have a beautiful day!
Comment from gramalot8
Oh so very funny. What is more wonderful than a mature woman and her witty ways. Now how could the manager argue with that? Ha ha. Great job and thanks for sharing this with.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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Oh so very funny. What is more wonderful than a mature woman and her witty ways. Now how could the manager argue with that? Ha ha. Great job and thanks for sharing this with.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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Thank you so very much for the great review! So happy it gave you a good chuckle! I had a great time putting this little old lady joke into poetic form! Thanks again and have a wonderful day!
Comment from harmony13
The author's words were filled with humor especially at the end! The
poem is engaging, descriptive and creative. I smiled and laughed a lot
throughout this poem. The author uses good examples to fight the battle!
The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and goes so
well with the theme and words of this poem! Great Poem, Mimi!
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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The author's words were filled with humor especially at the end! The
poem is engaging, descriptive and creative. I smiled and laughed a lot
throughout this poem. The author uses good examples to fight the battle!
The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and goes so
well with the theme and words of this poem! Great Poem, Mimi!
Comment Written 17-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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Thanks so much for the wonderful review, Harmony! It was quite a fun write and so happy it made you laugh (especially the end)! Thank you again and have a lovely evening!
Comment from Wendyanne
OMG how funny!!! I wasn't expecting that ending to the poem. You have certainly made me chuckle and I thank you for that. No wonder you won the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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OMG how funny!!! I wasn't expecting that ending to the poem. You have certainly made me chuckle and I thank you for that. No wonder you won the contest.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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Hi, Wendy! Thanks so much for the great review... I'm so happy that it gave you a good chuckle! It was quite a fun challenge to take this little old lady joke and put it into rhyme! Thank you again and have a wonderful evening!
Comment from JSD
I think this was the winner, and rightly so. Most amusing and really cleverly described in assured rhyme and rhythm. Well done and thank you for making us laugh.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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I think this was the winner, and rightly so. Most amusing and really cleverly described in assured rhyme and rhythm. Well done and thank you for making us laugh.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review! I'm so glad it gave you a good laugh! It was great fun to write! Thanks again and have a lovely evening!
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Awesome poem. It has a great flow and rhyme. Shows great humour and very well put together. I gave myself a special treat
When Eighty-Five I turned
So stayed last night at a grand hotel
A gift I thought I'd earned. Congrats on the win.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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Awesome poem. It has a great flow and rhyme. Shows great humour and very well put together. I gave myself a special treat
When Eighty-Five I turned
So stayed last night at a grand hotel
A gift I thought I'd earned. Congrats on the win.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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Hi, Joanne! Thank you for the wonderful review - am so happy it made you laugh and you enjoyed this funny little old lady poem! It was quite fun to write! Thank you again and have a lovely evening!
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Your welcome 🙂
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
You succeeded and I certainly laughed. Loved the upbeat tone and rhythm and your rhyming was a delight to read. It presented such a typical story for me of these rip-off hotels and I had a lovely ride all the way to the conclusion which was masterfully done. Just one small edit - 'queue' should be 'cue.' No wonder it was a contest winner! Debbie
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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You succeeded and I certainly laughed. Loved the upbeat tone and rhythm and your rhyming was a delight to read. It presented such a typical story for me of these rip-off hotels and I had a lovely ride all the way to the conclusion which was masterfully done. Just one small edit - 'queue' should be 'cue.' No wonder it was a contest winner! Debbie
Comment Written 16-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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Hi, Debbie! Thank you for the great review - I'm so happy it made you laugh and that you enjoyed! Was quite a fun one to write (love the devilishness of little old ladies)! Thanks again and have a wonderful evening!
Comment from Douglas Goff
Very well done. This has great unforced rhymes, a great rhythmic flow, and a very humorous ending.
Congratulations on a well-deserved win! Very enjoyable.
D
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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Very well done. This has great unforced rhymes, a great rhythmic flow, and a very humorous ending.
Congratulations on a well-deserved win! Very enjoyable.
D
Comment Written 15-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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Hi, Douglas! Thank you so very much for the wonderful congratulatory review - so happy you enjoyed both the rhyme and rhythm of my poetic interpretation of this little old lady joke - so fun to write! Thank you again and have a super week!
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
You are one of the few people submitting that seemed to understand humor. And, I did vote for you. It was just hysterical at the end. I loved that she threw the services she could have rendered up against the ones they could have rendered, fair is fair. Karen
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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You are one of the few people submitting that seemed to understand humor. And, I did vote for you. It was just hysterical at the end. I loved that she threw the services she could have rendered up against the ones they could have rendered, fair is fair. Karen
Comment Written 15-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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Hi, Karen! Thank you so much for the wonderful review and so happy you especially enjoyed the crazy ending! Little old ladies are spicy and full of surprises! Thank you again and have a grand week ahead!
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have a good week Karen