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Following God

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Comment from eliz100
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This is another excellent chapter. Will Ben be able to get out of this one? God works in mysterious ways. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2023

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
    Thank you. I can't see God letting Ben hang.
Comment from BethShelby
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I was shocked at the verdict. But the fact that the jury was harrassed into voting guilty seems a reason for a new trial. I'm sure God is somehow planning the next part of Ben's ministry,

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2023

reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
    Thank you. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from lyenochka
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Well, this is not the ending I was hoping for. But even in prison, I'm sure Ben will preach the gospel to the fellow inmates and probably to the wardens and guards. It's a minor setback or a new mission for him.

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2023

reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
    Thank you for your nice review.
    Remember, God works in mysterious ways.
Comment from royowen
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Is this the end? Or are we going to experience an acquittal? I think that would be a good thing, but Ben knew of Paul's being poured out as a drink, he was proud to die, even though he was guiltless of all crime, as is Ben, to live is Christ, but to die is gain, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2023

reply by the author on 13-Oct-2023
    Thank you. Nah, surely you wouldn't have Ben hang, or be murdered in prison! (smiley face here)
    Thank you for your review.
reply by royowen on 13-Oct-2023
    Of course not?I think
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2023
    smiley face here
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
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You have "someone, someone, anyone" - I would drop one "someone".

The Prosecutor is right about one thing - all Ben's good deeds don't matter if he killed a man, and self-defense was never proven, thanks to the stacked deck of witnesses.

"I'm here to bloom." Well, that's certainly a unique way to look at the situation!

Thanks, Wayne. See you next week.

xo
Pam

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2023

reply by the author on 13-Oct-2023
    Thank you for the great review.
Comment from Jim Wile
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Well, Wayne, you did a marvelous job of getting us all worked up by the injustice to Ben being perpetrated here. Although Henry did a crappy job of lawyering, it seems like the fix was in if indeed, they had "gotten to" Dr. Philmore.

I guess the only justice here was that the bad guy died. You've certainly got us wondering how Ben is going to escape his fate. I'm eager to find that out. - Jim

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2023

reply by the author on 13-Oct-2023
    Your review excites me!
    Several have expressed enough concern for Ben that I'm inspired.
    All I can say is that I enjoy reading unpredictable stuff, so...
    Remember, God works in mysterious ways.
    Thank you for your great review.
Comment from JSD
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Oh no! Is this the end? Surely not. I hope the appeal is successful. The trial was not what I expected; all falling apart too quickly. I presume that your masterful story telling has it all in hand!

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2023

reply by the author on 13-Oct-2023
    Thank you.
    1) I try to avoid predictable, and
    2) God works in mysterious ways.
    I appreciate your review.
Comment from Wendy G
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Goodness. What a predicament. I know Ben is ready to die, but justice has not been served, and corruption abounds in the evil desire of many to get rid of him. These evil ones are compounding their own sin and guilt. Now, how will you get him out?
Wendy
Edit: and you'll (be) in solitary until

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2023

reply by the author on 13-Oct-2023
    Thank you.
    Remember, God works in mysterious ways.
Comment from Barry Penfold
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Interesting Chapter. Seems poor old Ben is really in the poo. Things not going his way at all. I must read the preceding chapters, but this one is put together well. I am keen to know what happens next.
Regards
Barry Penfold.

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2023

reply by the author on 13-Oct-2023
    Thank you. I really appreciate your interest.
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Well, I don't know how much blooming Ben might do with a noose around his neck. But thankfully, I know you aren't going to let that happen. LOL. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2023

reply by the author on 13-Oct-2023
    Thank you.
    Yeah, pretty hard to conceal that (not hanging Ben).