Miranda's Trouble In Paradise
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Flowers"Miranda tries to find Dougie.
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That doesn't sound good, Miranda must start taking things seriously or she could come a cropper. And I don't want that!! I like Preston, he's sensible as well as brainy. Now, who was that by the dumpster? I wonder if I'll find out in the next part? Hmm. Loving this story, my clever friend. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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That doesn't sound good, Miranda must start taking things seriously or she could come a cropper. And I don't want that!! I like Preston, he's sensible as well as brainy. Now, who was that by the dumpster? I wonder if I'll find out in the next part? Hmm. Loving this story, my clever friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 27-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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Thanks for this. What is a cropper? Lol. Now I have to know. Gretchen
Comment from w.j.debi
It's nice that the old man has returned to thank Miranda for her help, even though he couldn't do it personally. It's great that Preston is so affable. Miranda may even find an ally. Now, who was by the dumpster? Hmm.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023
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It's nice that the old man has returned to thank Miranda for her help, even though he couldn't do it personally. It's great that Preston is so affable. Miranda may even find an ally. Now, who was by the dumpster? Hmm.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. Gretchen
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
OOOOOOh, how creepy and Halloweeny. Something isn't right out there. I am catching up with my mail and reviewing after the wifi being up and down for two weeks. I owe you three. Karen
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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OOOOOOh, how creepy and Halloweeny. Something isn't right out there. I am catching up with my mail and reviewing after the wifi being up and down for two weeks. I owe you three. Karen
Comment Written 28-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2023
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Take your time if you need to. I appreciate your kind words. Gretchen
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Have a good weekend. What's left. :-) Karen
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Nicely paced story moving along smoothly. I like your charactersdevelopment. Mirandais an interesting woman. I love whenshe tells Ritato back up or she'll kill her. LoL. Preston turn out to be a good. Guy. He brings up a good point about the creepy man by the dumpster. What's going on? .... suspenseful ending.... cliffhanger.
Well done! You are an exceptional writer.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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Nicely paced story moving along smoothly. I like your charactersdevelopment. Mirandais an interesting woman. I love whenshe tells Ritato back up or she'll kill her. LoL. Preston turn out to be a good. Guy. He brings up a good point about the creepy man by the dumpster. What's going on? .... suspenseful ending.... cliffhanger.
Well done! You are an exceptional writer.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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Thank you. If a customer tells me I'm sweet or nice, I will always tell them not to let that kind of information out. Thanks for this. Gretchen
Comment from Sankey
Great chapter, again. I am glad Miranda likes the young help. Keep it all coming. Can't wait for more of your stuff. Did you ever consider continuing with Jameson and Fin after Iris?
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2023
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Great chapter, again. I am glad Miranda likes the young help. Keep it all coming. Can't wait for more of your stuff. Did you ever consider continuing with Jameson and Fin after Iris?
Comment Written 13-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2023
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Thanks so much. I'm glad you liked it. No plans at the present for Jameson and Fin. Gretchen
Comment from Jay Squires
Preston!? Didn't you use him in the last story as the young man who had just moved to town? He seemed cock-sure like this Preston. If I'm right, I'm just curious why you would use the same name in consecutive stories. At any rate I do like him as a character. I'll be curious to find out what the subtext was to the carnations in the cup.
Jay
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2023
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Preston!? Didn't you use him in the last story as the young man who had just moved to town? He seemed cock-sure like this Preston. If I'm right, I'm just curious why you would use the same name in consecutive stories. At any rate I do like him as a character. I'll be curious to find out what the subtext was to the carnations in the cup.
Jay
Comment Written 13-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2023
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This is the very same Preston who was Terry Joe's friend. I hinted at his being in this story by having him go get his Gatorade and snacks with Terry Joe. I liked his character. He's full of personality. What makes you think the carnations are anything more than a smitten old man's gesture? Lol. Thanks for this. Gretchen
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written chapter and has some spookiness to it also. You used great descriptive words and very good dialogue. I look forward to your next chapter! love and blessings, teri
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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This is a very well written chapter and has some spookiness to it also. You used great descriptive words and very good dialogue. I look forward to your next chapter! love and blessings, teri
Comment Written 12-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much for this nice review. Gretchen
Comment from nancy_e_davis
they put the [flowers] in the cup or did you?"
I wish your post was longer every time you post, Gretchen. LOL Doesn't Matt have a camera documenting the parking lot? I am always happy to see a Marinda chapter, but want to enjoy more when we get one. Well done... just too short.
The part about Preston is wonderful. He is just behaving in a way that will endure him to Marinda for sure. She understands young boys and that is a fact. LOL Well done. They will get into a lot of mischief together. He rushes in where fools fear to tread. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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they put the [flowers] in the cup or did you?"
I wish your post was longer every time you post, Gretchen. LOL Doesn't Matt have a camera documenting the parking lot? I am always happy to see a Marinda chapter, but want to enjoy more when we get one. Well done... just too short.
The part about Preston is wonderful. He is just behaving in a way that will endure him to Marinda for sure. She understands young boys and that is a fact. LOL Well done. They will get into a lot of mischief together. He rushes in where fools fear to tread. Nancy:)
Comment Written 12-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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I'm trying to post Miranda at least twice a week. So, posts may not be long but will hopefully be often. Thank you very much. Gretchen
Comment from Sanku
you have ended this with a cliffhanger like suspense.
Very well written and very good character development too.
Glad she is accepting preston finally .I feel relieved..
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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you have ended this with a cliffhanger like suspense.
Very well written and very good character development too.
Glad she is accepting preston finally .I feel relieved..
Comment Written 12-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much. I do love a cliffhanger. Gretchen
Comment from Wendy G
Good for Preston to notice the guy hanging aroundand he will be up to no good. I'm a bit suspicious of the guy who couldn't fill up his car, and now brings flowers. He seems a bit too sweet and disarming. I feel that there is a net enclosing Miranda at present. It's an ending filled with suspense, so I am looking forward to more.
Wendy
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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Good for Preston to notice the guy hanging aroundand he will be up to no good. I'm a bit suspicious of the guy who couldn't fill up his car, and now brings flowers. He seems a bit too sweet and disarming. I feel that there is a net enclosing Miranda at present. It's an ending filled with suspense, so I am looking forward to more.
Wendy
Comment Written 12-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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Thanks Wendy. I'm glad you are enjoying this. I'm a suspicious type as well. Gretchen