Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

yes Gypsy, I do like your dark Haiku posting and its accompanying artwork and color scheme!

I was initially attracted to your horror-like writing poetry.

Your selected crow adds to these dark feelings.

Mark

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

This entire presentation has a very dark feel to it. Today, in Texas, we're very cloudy and dark. We usually have bright blue skies with not a cloud in sight. One would think rain in headed our direction. Nope, only 2 percent chance. I give up. LOL Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. (*=*) Have a wonderful day.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

love dark and story nights
the crow's eyes look like they're glowing creepily lol

very cool haiku with great imagery and smooth flow

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. (*=*) Have a wonderful day.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

With just one crow, it's not a "murder" then? I like the ominous feeling you created with this little haiku. The cemetery setting makes it even more spooky. Great use of alliteration, too!

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023

Thank you, big sister.... no murder, just one crow.

Love

Marival

reply by lyenochka on 11-Oct-2023

😊💞

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Exceptional

Because that's what cries do. ;) Very colorful and intense presentation, matching your poem, perfectly.

Enjoyable and exceptional writing!


Alexan :)

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023

Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words. :)

Gypsy hugs

Comment from aryr

Excellent

What an intriguing haiku, Gypsy. The crow was a wonderful touch to add it to the surrounding cemetery. I love crows because they have special meaning to me. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023

Crows are magical and mysterious creatures.

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. :) blessed be.

Gypsy hugs

reply by aryr on 11-Oct-2023

Most welcome, Gypsy.

Comment from Chrissy710

Excellent

Hi Gypsy ( Marival) wow an impact statement this Haiku makes cant mistake the intent of this one
Dark but engaging
Dean would approve
Cheers Chris

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023

Yes...I always think of Dean when I write dark poems.

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. :)

Gypsy hugs

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

Now this was a mood setter. I see the crow as a bird that is connected to the afterlife. Usually someone who isn't quite at peace. This was awesome and a tad eerie. Thank you for sharing. Gretchen

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023

I'm glad you like it. (*÷*) that means a lot to me.

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. :)

Gypsy hugs