Love is Near
A Rondelet of Faith and Love5 total reviews
Comment from JT traveller
This rondelet speaks volumes and is open to many different interpretations. A very clever write. Lovely presentation. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Jacqueline
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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This rondelet speaks volumes and is open to many different interpretations. A very clever write. Lovely presentation. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Jacqueline
Comment Written 11-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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Thank you Jacqueline. :) I'm happy the traveler is doing fine. Last time I heard from you was Thailand? I'm glad you liked it.
PS. I'm not Cindy. :)
Comment from JSD
i think you need to take your name off the notes or you'll be disqualified. Otherwise this is a heartfelt and beautifully composed little poem about your faith. Well done and good luck. x
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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i think you need to take your name off the notes or you'll be disqualified. Otherwise this is a heartfelt and beautifully composed little poem about your faith. Well done and good luck. x
Comment Written 11-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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PS. I'm not Cindy. :) I corrected it. I'm glad you liked it.
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Ok. Cool. X
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Hi Cindy, just in case you get disqualified - you may want to remove your name from author's notes as this is a blind contest ;-)
All syllables are in check for this rondelet poem entry. Our love is near - being the repeat line and suggests it is parents to their child or loved one. Words of encouragement in a poem. Nicely done and best of luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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Hi Cindy, just in case you get disqualified - you may want to remove your name from author's notes as this is a blind contest ;-)
All syllables are in check for this rondelet poem entry. Our love is near - being the repeat line and suggests it is parents to their child or loved one. Words of encouragement in a poem. Nicely done and best of luck in the competition.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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PS. I'm not Cindy. :) I corrected it. I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine post for the contest Cindy and I wish you luck. I am not familiar with this form and I enjoyed the sentiments, it is much better to feel love in our heart as the alternative destroys our love, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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A fine post for the contest Cindy and I wish you luck. I am not familiar with this form and I enjoyed the sentiments, it is much better to feel love in our heart as the alternative destroys our love, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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Thank you, Dolly. I'm glad you liked it.
PS. I'm not Cindy. :)
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Oh, I am so sorry, I saw Cindy in your notes. Silly me, I do apologise x x x
Comment from royowen
The wonderful thing you don't know how true this is, if you love God, you will know that God is love and He's omnipresent, so yes, love is indeed near, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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The wonderful thing you don't know how true this is, if you love God, you will know that God is love and He's omnipresent, so yes, love is indeed near, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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Thank you, Roy. :) You feel His love also. I'm glad you liked it.
PS. I'm not Cindy. :)
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Sorry my friend
