Butterfly Wings
wee poem7 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
Congratulations on your winning entry in the recent Rondelet contest.
One can easily imagine this butterfly encounter through your verse. The invitation was accepted! Good use of the illustration to pair with your poem.
Mark
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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Congratulations on your winning entry in the recent Rondelet contest.
One can easily imagine this butterfly encounter through your verse. The invitation was accepted! Good use of the illustration to pair with your poem.
Mark
Comment Written 16-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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Thanks Marco for the kind review and extra stars.
I actually started off with butterflies in mind but then it morphed into something quite different. ( biggrin)
I found the pic after .. took me over an hour but it was worth it.
Comment from JPGeo
Tempeste, congrats on this win. You deserved it with this very creative, descriptive and suggestive rondelet. I thought this was a super competitive contest with all great entries. You nailed it!
Applauds,
John
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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Tempeste, congrats on this win. You deserved it with this very creative, descriptive and suggestive rondelet. I thought this was a super competitive contest with all great entries. You nailed it!
Applauds,
John
Comment Written 12-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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Ciao!
Thank you for the kind words.
There were many grand entries to pick from in this contest.
I?m glad "Swirling " made the podium too,
congratulations! 😊
Keep safe! 🍀
Comment from rhonnie69
Ciao seductive inviting poet. I have a dear close friend who once said to me..."men are sexually wired." At first...I laughed...ha ha ha ha. Then I thought to myself. If that allegation (an assertion made without substantial proof) is true...then please do, tell me who...it is that..."drives," us to be that way?! Now I'm sure that I know. And...well...then again...maybe I'd better ask of my girlfriend. She knows everything. hee hee.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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Ciao seductive inviting poet. I have a dear close friend who once said to me..."men are sexually wired." At first...I laughed...ha ha ha ha. Then I thought to myself. If that allegation (an assertion made without substantial proof) is true...then please do, tell me who...it is that..."drives," us to be that way?! Now I'm sure that I know. And...well...then again...maybe I'd better ask of my girlfriend. She knows everything. hee hee.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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Actually I was thinking of butterflies initially
when a female is ready to mate , she opens her wings.
This made me think of a woman and then the poem morphed into a woman with butterfly wings. ( biggrin)
Glad you found my wee poem worthy of that extra star! ( wink)
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Perfection. The picture is exquisite, The matting is unmatched. The font is just right. The black of the type should overwhelm but does not. Altogether one of the best pieces I have seen. Karen
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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Perfection. The picture is exquisite, The matting is unmatched. The font is just right. The black of the type should overwhelm but does not. Altogether one of the best pieces I have seen. Karen
Comment Written 11-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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It took me over an hour to find the pic ( of course Pinterest never lets me down ) ( biggrin)
I was so excited when I found the same light beige for the background which is also in the wings.
Thank you for the enthusiastic review and the extra shiny star!
Comment from GregoryCody
I don't know who you are but THIS poem just made me not enter. Haha. It's THAT good. I love the refrain. The word choices are perfect. GREAT JOB. I usually would not do this for a blind review but wow :)
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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I don't know who you are but THIS poem just made me not enter. Haha. It's THAT good. I love the refrain. The word choices are perfect. GREAT JOB. I usually would not do this for a blind review but wow :)
Comment Written 10-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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There are several excellent entries, most probably you fancied this topic more. (wink)
We have met before and now and then our paths have crossed.
I appreciate the enthusiasm and the extra star.!
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YES I did lol. Now I know it was you. Great piece!!
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Strange thing is .. initially, I wanted to write a wee poem about butterflies but when I was searching for a pic , I found that one with the miss with butterfly wings? hence I changed my mind.
Keep safe🍀
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That happens to me sometimes too!! I love when that happens.
Comment from Eleri
You have mastered the Rondelet form well and the rhyming is good throughout. However, I think it would sound better as 'titillating feelings they bring' rather than 'titillation feelings...'
Good luck in the contest
Eleri
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023
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You have mastered the Rondelet form well and the rhyming is good throughout. However, I think it would sound better as 'titillating feelings they bring' rather than 'titillation feelings...'
Good luck in the contest
Eleri
Comment Written 10-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the kind words and helpful feedback .. I have made the edit!
Keep safe!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This sounds provocative and sexual to me, as the invitation is accepted with open arms here, I wish you luck with the contest, your words are a give away as to what is really going on here, love Dolly x
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This sounds provocative and sexual to me, as the invitation is accepted with open arms here, I wish you luck with the contest, your words are a give away as to what is really going on here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Oct-2023
