Walk with Me
A Rondelet Poem7 total reviews
Comment from papa55mike
An excellent poem! I love the colors and format. If we would only wait for His voice to lead us. What a wonderfully written piece.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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An excellent poem! I love the colors and format. If we would only wait for His voice to lead us. What a wonderfully written piece.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 12-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023
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Thank you, mike, for your exceptional comments and six stars, I enjoyed trying this form to express myself, as always very much appreciated****kahpot-I signed as the contest has now finished
Comment from Wendy G
Well done. Faith, asking, believing, trusting, and acting in His name with love and compassion, are all a part of the Christian walk. Sending best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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Well done. Faith, asking, believing, trusting, and acting in His name with love and compassion, are all a part of the Christian walk. Sending best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 11-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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Thank you so very much
Comment from JPGeo
I like your rondelet. It is a reverse prayer of sorts with God being the one asking for faith in Him. It flows well with the repeats falling at the right moments in the poem. Really nice. Best wishes and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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I like your rondelet. It is a reverse prayer of sorts with God being the one asking for faith in Him. It flows well with the repeats falling at the right moments in the poem. Really nice. Best wishes and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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Thank you so very much
Comment from JSD
A very nicely composed rondelet. You have fitted your ideas perfectly into the form and the repeated refrain makes perfect sense and works very well. Well done for giving voice to your faith so successfully.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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A very nicely composed rondelet. You have fitted your ideas perfectly into the form and the repeated refrain makes perfect sense and works very well. Well done for giving voice to your faith so successfully.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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Thank you so very much
Comment from Sally Law
I really enjoyed your lovely rondelet, mystery poet. I am basking in my faith today in the light of Him. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally Law :))
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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I really enjoyed your lovely rondelet, mystery poet. I am basking in my faith today in the light of Him. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally Law :))
Comment Written 11-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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Thank you so very much
Comment from JT traveller
A lovely rondelet. It speaks volumes of your faith and spirituality. Beautifully presented, easy to read and a great choice of accompanying illustration. Jacqueline
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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A lovely rondelet. It speaks volumes of your faith and spirituality. Beautifully presented, easy to read and a great choice of accompanying illustration. Jacqueline
Comment Written 11-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed the repeated line to drive home your point here and wish you luck with the contest, fine faithful words to showcase your beliefs, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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I enjoyed the repeated line to drive home your point here and wish you luck with the contest, fine faithful words to showcase your beliefs, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much
