Comment from TPAC

Excellent

Lovely. I feel your thoughts, excluding people, just those things intimate to your life: I like it. Cruel. Yet, sometimes how the dice is rolled. I found a poetic structuring with this read: compiling to my interests.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023

Thank you so much

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a fun post about your little woofer and I enjoyed your poem here as you made me smile and I wish you luck with the contest, this is endearing, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023

The picture is not of Zack but could be a relative. Thanks again for your encouragement.

Comment from giraffmang

Good

Hi there,

first sentence could do with some commas.

There's something strange going on with the punctuation and formatting. I'm unclear whether this is a poem or not. It feels more like one than prose but it's classified as a general story so it's a bit confusing.

So, I guess the philosophy is 'get a dog'?

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2023

I have to laugh English was my best subject at school but in doing the proof read, the Aussie computer version and unable to use the USA version there are three different directions. However you would not be doing a god review without mention the need to improve.

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

This is very nice and I have no doubt it appeal to the dog and pet owners that make up the majority of FanStory. What I would advise on, is adding punctuation and capitalization, as this is listed as prose.

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023

thank you for your wise pointer