Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

lol cool pics and dark poem with good imagery

fun word choices with smooth flow

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

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 Comment Written 11-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. (*=*) Have a wonderful day.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Jumbo J

Excellent

Hi Gypsy Queen,
straight away I read between my own thoughts and lines even though your Gogyoha suite is both scary in visual thought, and with that sprinkling of humour, so we don't have to cover our heads on going to bed tonight in fear.

I read a lot of the desire for freedom... and I guess the allure to the 'bad boy' persona may give that opportunity to spread one's wings... but in the same time, flying too close the sun, a setup to get singed, falling onto the bumpy road ahead.

And then you have saps like me, who when younger and more carefree tried to put the bad boy mask into action. It's hard to be a bad boy when your polite and courteous... so no, that never worked. I guess we are all trying to find our place in the world at the age of curiosity?

I loved the way your Gogyhka suite is fluid in its connection.

Damn you Lucifer, I'm staying cool, calm and collected... sending ice your way... Hotshot!

With our thoughts we create...
the errors of our ways.

Warmest... hmmmmm, considering, no coolest regards,
James.
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 Comment Written 10-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023

I was trying to be funny and spooky for Halloween but failed miserably. Helen took it literally and thought it was sad... but Helen is very kind-hearted and feels bad for the most unlikely characters. Only you and Gretchen got the dark humor. C'est le vie. I've been on a dark mood all day and mostly crying.

Abrazos, amigo mio

Marival
"Do not speak - unless it improves on silence." -Buudha

reply by Jumbo J on 10-Oct-2023

Love the quote!
I did not see the sad... I saw a lot of other things, maybe just in my own experiences with that subject though.

Over and over again I watch the bad boy win over the good boy... strange thing there is when it's all said and done... the bad gets stale and the good reamians and equilibrium of stability.
A short story, okay(((.
The past couple of months I've had two different wone contact me out of the blue who I have seen or had contact with for let's say 46 years. Jade imeditalet said they were checking my availability, me, I said no way. Jade was right both dropped off when I told them how happy I was and how long I had been with Jade. They both mentioned what a great bloke I was, how I was always there for them... mr reliable... and both went to my high school... one of them I dated for a short time, after school until she went for the bad boy on a motorcycle who was in a gang. But that's another story for another day my friend.

My prayers are with you and John MariVal.🙏💖

reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023

Good for you, those women sound horrible.

Abrazos, amigo mio.

Marival
"Goodness is about character - integrity, honesty, kindness, generosity, moral courage, and the like. More than anything else, it is about how we treat other people." - will rogers

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

This is a dark Halloween poem, but...in all seriousness, it happens often in society. We, as humans, allow our greed to take over. This is a beautiful presentation. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023

Yes, is partly dark humor, partly a true horror in our world.

Thank you very much, Barbara.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Mike Stevens

Excellent

Another fine poem, Gypsy....and personally I never understood what women who want a bad boy expect will happen, and are hurt in the end, yet timr after time they do it again

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

Ooh, dark indeed. But desire is a powerful thing. Isn't desire the reason people always say be careful what you wish for. This was great. Spooky enough to give chills but the moral wasn't lost on me. Great piece. Gretchen

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023

I'm glad you like it. Not many are getting the dark humor .

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

That's so sad. The immortal soul should never be squandered for riches and fame on earth only to lose it all to the evil one who really hates all of us. Scary story told in your gogyohka poem!

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023

I'm sorry. It's just a fictional tale but it's supposed to be scary for Halloween. I tried to add some humor. Gretchen inspired me.

Love

Marival

Comment from aryr

Excellent

WOW!!! I was going to say that the poem was a little ghoulish, Gypsy, but it was based on the picture. She promised her heart and soul to Satan. Doomed she was and doomed she be. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023

Yeah is a Halloween dark humor poem.

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

reply by aryr on 10-Oct-2023

You are so welcome, Gypsy.