Comment from
Lea Tonin1
This is a very nice well put together poem. I like the rhyming scheme you chose too quite good. It looks great too, with the pink text and nice script that you chose.
Having said that, I see no issues with grammar, sentence structure or subject matter. It looks good and sounds good. I wish you best of luck and have a great night!
Comment Written 09-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023
Thank you very much for your kind review!
Comment from
Tom Horonzy
Good try but it fell short of my understanding what you were trying to get across. Help me understand. Also, neither of the font selections help in regards to color, style and size.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
I was just trying to say never give up. I appreciate your feedback.