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2023 Gypsy's Free Verse

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Comment from Ginda Simpson
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I love the images you have chosen as much as your chosen words. You wrote this one with your paintbrush, no doubt, and if it were a painting, it would win a ribbon. Simply beautiful.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs

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Comment from Bill Schott
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This free verse, The Goddess of Autumn, gives some personification to the transitional deity who whips into the scene and deadens all growth in preparation of the next arrival of the Winter Queen.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs


Comment from Mary Vigasin
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I love this time of year both for the color and the cooling temperatures. We are a little late this year with our colors so your words and presentation are very much appreciated.
Beautiful in words and presentation.
Best wishes,
Mary

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from w.j.debi
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Autumn is my favorite season and you do a wonderful tribute to her in your verse. It seems all is right with the world when autumn colors start to appear and the world is ready for a wonderful party.

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
    Thank you very much, Debi. I appreciate your excellent review and kind words.

    gypsy hugs
reply by w.j.debi on 09-Oct-2023
    I just saw Helen's note about your son. I have added him and you to my prayer list. Best wishes and good vibes for both of you.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023
    Thank you for your prayers, we appreciate it very much.

    Hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I wish this Goddess of Autumn would get lost and come down Texas way. Autumn is my favorite season and really don't have an autumn here. Your presentation is beautiful as is your poem.

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
    Thank you very much, Barbara. I appreciate your excellent review and kind words.

    gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
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I absolutely adored this, Gypsy, because it told us of the summer's fading. The picture was of a beautiful young woman bathed in autumn's colors and pumpkins. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!! Your words were wonderful!

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
    Thank you very much, Aryr. I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.

    gypsy hugs
reply by aryr on 09-Oct-2023
    You are so welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from Mike Stevens
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....and so begins the slide into darker days to match my mood. with clijare change seems the only season left to halfway enjoy is spring

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
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i like that last line in memories-of-summer-green
great imagery in this autumn poem
interesting word choices and smooth flow

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from JSD
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Beautifully phrased as always, Gypsy. The choice of words is immaculate and the imagery perfect. I love the way it is all one sentence. Well done.

John x

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
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You manage to get hold of the most wonderful artwork Gypsy, I'm most impressed that it is so consistently brilliant, another first class job of posting a great piece of poetry, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
    Happy birthday!!!!

    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by royowen on 09-Oct-2023
    Bless you Gypsy