2023 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "The Goddess of Autumn".
15 total reviews
Comment from Ginda Simpson
I love the images you have chosen as much as your chosen words. You wrote this one with your paintbrush, no doubt, and if it were a painting, it would win a ribbon. Simply beautiful.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023
I love the images you have chosen as much as your chosen words. You wrote this one with your paintbrush, no doubt, and if it were a painting, it would win a ribbon. Simply beautiful.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from Bill Schott
This free verse, The Goddess of Autumn, gives some personification to the transitional deity who whips into the scene and deadens all growth in preparation of the next arrival of the Winter Queen.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023
This free verse, The Goddess of Autumn, gives some personification to the transitional deity who whips into the scene and deadens all growth in preparation of the next arrival of the Winter Queen.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from Mary Vigasin
I love this time of year both for the color and the cooling temperatures. We are a little late this year with our colors so your words and presentation are very much appreciated.
Beautiful in words and presentation.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
I love this time of year both for the color and the cooling temperatures. We are a little late this year with our colors so your words and presentation are very much appreciated.
Beautiful in words and presentation.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 09-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from w.j.debi
Autumn is my favorite season and you do a wonderful tribute to her in your verse. It seems all is right with the world when autumn colors start to appear and the world is ready for a wonderful party.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
Autumn is my favorite season and you do a wonderful tribute to her in your verse. It seems all is right with the world when autumn colors start to appear and the world is ready for a wonderful party.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much, Debi. I appreciate your excellent review and kind words.
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I just saw Helen's note about your son. I have added him and you to my prayer list. Best wishes and good vibes for both of you.
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Thank you for your prayers, we appreciate it very much.
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I wish this Goddess of Autumn would get lost and come down Texas way. Autumn is my favorite season and really don't have an autumn here. Your presentation is beautiful as is your poem.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
I wish this Goddess of Autumn would get lost and come down Texas way. Autumn is my favorite season and really don't have an autumn here. Your presentation is beautiful as is your poem.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much, Barbara. I appreciate your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from aryr
I absolutely adored this, Gypsy, because it told us of the summer's fading. The picture was of a beautiful young woman bathed in autumn's colors and pumpkins. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!! Your words were wonderful!
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
I absolutely adored this, Gypsy, because it told us of the summer's fading. The picture was of a beautiful young woman bathed in autumn's colors and pumpkins. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!! Your words were wonderful!
Comment Written 09-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much, Aryr. I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.
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You are so welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy....and so begins the slide into darker days to match my mood. with clijare change seems the only season left to halfway enjoy is spring
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
Another fine poem, Gypsy....and so begins the slide into darker days to match my mood. with clijare change seems the only season left to halfway enjoy is spring
Comment Written 09-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from shelley kaye
i like that last line in memories-of-summer-green
great imagery in this autumn poem
interesting word choices and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
i like that last line in memories-of-summer-green
great imagery in this autumn poem
interesting word choices and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 09-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from JSD
Beautifully phrased as always, Gypsy. The choice of words is immaculate and the imagery perfect. I love the way it is all one sentence. Well done.
John x
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
Beautifully phrased as always, Gypsy. The choice of words is immaculate and the imagery perfect. I love the way it is all one sentence. Well done.
John x
Comment Written 09-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from royowen
You manage to get hold of the most wonderful artwork Gypsy, I'm most impressed that it is so consistently brilliant, another first class job of posting a great piece of poetry, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
You manage to get hold of the most wonderful artwork Gypsy, I'm most impressed that it is so consistently brilliant, another first class job of posting a great piece of poetry, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 09-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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Happy birthday!!!!
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Bless you Gypsy