THE dream that stands still
Dreaming out loud5 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Floyd
This sometimes rhyming free verse seems a little Zen Buddhist to me.
It reminds us to stay still just long enough to figure which way to go to fulfill our dreams.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Enjoy your day.
Joan
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Hi Floyd
This sometimes rhyming free verse seems a little Zen Buddhist to me.
It reminds us to stay still just long enough to figure which way to go to fulfill our dreams.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Enjoy your day.
Joan
Comment Written 09-Oct-2023
Comment from Wendy G
It's a bit abstract for my simple brain, but to me, it speaks of peace and serenity, and it would seem to be searching to experience and to remember and to capture the dreams.
Wendy
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It's a bit abstract for my simple brain, but to me, it speaks of peace and serenity, and it would seem to be searching to experience and to remember and to capture the dreams.
Wendy
Comment Written 08-Oct-2023
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Your dream takes the form of this stream of consciousness in which you long for everything to stand still, whether that be nature in all its glory or history merging with the present to create a wondrous surround of movable feasts. In short, a utopia. An excellent and evocative verse which provides a very pleasing and unusual read. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
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Your dream takes the form of this stream of consciousness in which you long for everything to stand still, whether that be nature in all its glory or history merging with the present to create a wondrous surround of movable feasts. In short, a utopia. An excellent and evocative verse which provides a very pleasing and unusual read. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
Comment Written 07-Oct-2023
Comment from royowen
This reminds me of the seven biblical feasts which are eternal,, but the express the works of Christ, that are woven not only in the new testament, but throughout the old, many thousands of years before they happened, this is beautifully written, blessings Roy
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This reminds me of the seven biblical feasts which are eternal,, but the express the works of Christ, that are woven not only in the new testament, but throughout the old, many thousands of years before they happened, this is beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-Oct-2023
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Holy smokes this is super good! I read it and then I write it again. I tried to pick a favorite line. There just is a run for me to pick. Cause they're all really good!
I like that you use ancient places and words for this poem, which is one of my favorite Topics.
Or esthetics, it's laid out pretty cool. I think and you have a nice picture too. A fine submission and I Wish You the Best Of luck!
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Holy smokes this is super good! I read it and then I write it again. I tried to pick a favorite line. There just is a run for me to pick. Cause they're all really good!
I like that you use ancient places and words for this poem, which is one of my favorite Topics.
Or esthetics, it's laid out pretty cool. I think and you have a nice picture too. A fine submission and I Wish You the Best Of luck!
Comment Written 07-Oct-2023
