2023 Gypsy's Haiku
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13 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This senryu suite. Across the Universe, has the proper formatting and provides a place where a heart can process the feelings for another who has become the end all and be all.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023
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This senryu suite. Across the Universe, has the proper formatting and provides a place where a heart can process the feelings for another who has become the end all and be all.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from kahpot
How beautiful, I really like how this poem tells a story of a love that seems to have gone unnoticed, an excellent suite of senryu's, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2023
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How beautiful, I really like how this poem tells a story of a love that seems to have gone unnoticed, an excellent suite of senryu's, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 08-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
The artwork is eloquent like your poem. This is a perfect presentation. Every time I swear you can't do any better and then you outshine yourself. Thank you for sharing this with us. We're truly blessed.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2023
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The artwork is eloquent like your poem. This is a perfect presentation. Every time I swear you can't do any better and then you outshine yourself. Thank you for sharing this with us. We're truly blessed.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words, Barbara.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
A beautifully written work this one, Gypsy, superbly expressed in terrific language and a particularly well presented post, with fantastically suitable artwork, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2023
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A beautifully written work this one, Gypsy, superbly expressed in terrific language and a particularly well presented post, with fantastically suitable artwork, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words, Roy.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome
Comment from Douglas Goff
Very beautifully written my friend. The pictures are elegant to match your wonderful words. Plus the color pattern is unique and and rich. Very enjoyable!
Douglas
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2023
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Very beautifully written my friend. The pictures are elegant to match your wonderful words. Plus the color pattern is unique and and rich. Very enjoyable!
Douglas
Comment Written 07-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. May you have a wonderful night.
Gypsy hugs.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Gloria ....
This is a fine senryu suite with vivid and sensory imagery that is most satisfying.
Your presentation as always enhances of potpourri of fragrance and beauty.
Very nicely done. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2023
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This is a fine senryu suite with vivid and sensory imagery that is most satisfying.
Your presentation as always enhances of potpourri of fragrance and beauty.
Very nicely done. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 07-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words. May you have a wonderful night.
Gypsy hugs.
Comment from aryr
What a great senryu haiku, Gypsy. This was so beautiful. Your words were delightful and really enjoyed. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2023
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What a great senryu haiku, Gypsy. This was so beautiful. Your words were delightful and really enjoyed. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 07-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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You are so welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----been, there, done that----gazed from a far as a girl I liked grew more and more out of my league, or so I believed. Guess I'll never know because I let my insecurities drive the bus!
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2023
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----been, there, done that----gazed from a far as a girl I liked grew more and more out of my league, or so I believed. Guess I'll never know because I let my insecurities drive the bus!
Comment Written 07-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2023
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Yes, I know what you mean. I bet a lot of girls want you... lol
Thank you very much, Mike.
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Gypsy Queen,
a master stroke of construction, flowing the senryu from one to the next seamlessly into a complete story.
Ah, I'm sure she is as ardent as the love and passion 'he' holds for her within his all.
She doesn't need
extravagant perfumes
in crystal spray-bottles
Her intoxicating scent
of rose and jasmine
follows where she goes..
and I love the reference to the power and a never ending to her radiance~~ with her royal crown of flowers.
You brought in a 'no' need for a complicated love, as the need is only of the love not about a manufactured allured to it.
You do have the best presentation, images that give that added highlight to the beautiful words you so deftly compose MariVal.
Just beautiful!
With our thoughts we create...
a heart full of love and gratitude.
Warmest regards,
James.
"I will love the light for it shows me the way, yet I will love the darkness because it shows me the stars"~~- Og Mandino
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2023
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Hi Gypsy Queen,
a master stroke of construction, flowing the senryu from one to the next seamlessly into a complete story.
Ah, I'm sure she is as ardent as the love and passion 'he' holds for her within his all.
She doesn't need
extravagant perfumes
in crystal spray-bottles
Her intoxicating scent
of rose and jasmine
follows where she goes..
and I love the reference to the power and a never ending to her radiance~~ with her royal crown of flowers.
You brought in a 'no' need for a complicated love, as the need is only of the love not about a manufactured allured to it.
You do have the best presentation, images that give that added highlight to the beautiful words you so deftly compose MariVal.
Just beautiful!
With our thoughts we create...
a heart full of love and gratitude.
Warmest regards,
James.
"I will love the light for it shows me the way, yet I will love the darkness because it shows me the stars"~~- Og Mandino
Comment Written 07-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2023
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ooh... I love that quote... it's so beautiful
Thank you, James, I said it so many times that it's getting old but it's true .... you know my heart and mind... you get me.
I am happy you like this one. I am trying something new, changing the POV -- I am glad it worked out.
It's so good to hear from you for many reasons, the pleasure of reading your beautiful and intuitive reviews, and thinking you must be feeling well enough to write reviews.
Abrazos amigo mio,
MariVal
"You are truly home only when you find your tribe of kindred spirits." - Srividya Srinivasan
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Thankful for your wonderful reply and for the magical nature of the quote... how so very true!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This girl has certainly made an impression and yet she is unaware of her admirer here, an ambient and colourful post, much enjoyed. I have never heard of the Haiku Foundation of America before, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2023
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This girl has certainly made an impression and yet she is unaware of her admirer here, an ambient and colourful post, much enjoyed. I have never heard of the Haiku Foundation of America before, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2023
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Thank you very much for reading my poem. May you have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs