More than a Swig
just silly talk2 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
From Christ's blood to grape juice all in one day, a fun post for the contest and I enjoyed your inventive story here and wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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From Christ's blood to grape juice all in one day, a fun post for the contest and I enjoyed your inventive story here and wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Oct-2023
Comment from JSD
Amusing and very well composed. Well done and I think you will prosper well in the competition. Great use of rhyme at times; perhaps you could have organised more into the verse? Otherwise, excellent stuff.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2023
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Amusing and very well composed. Well done and I think you will prosper well in the competition. Great use of rhyme at times; perhaps you could have organised more into the verse? Otherwise, excellent stuff.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2023
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In all honesty, I had just had lunch and I opened fanstory and saw the prompt...
... and decided to enter 45 minutes before the deadline.
I just wrote what came into my mind.
It's silly talk, I know. (wink)