Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this poem with us. We lived in South Carolina for three years, courtesy of the Army. LOL The beaches are gorgeous.

Yes, on this up and coming and nding Summer day. (ending???)

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023

Thanks Barbara and sorry for thr late reply.
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Comment from JSD

Excellent

The shore's guardians? Apostrophe needed? Otherwise this is a beautiful piece, Ricky. Well done. Some and unusual and striking vocabulary makes your verse shine.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023

Thanks for your review and thoughts.
Sorry for thr late reply.
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Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

Looking good, Doc! I take it you're still hanging out in the Carolinas? I spent my share of time in both North and South Carolina with the military. Great states.

Hope you find yourself well!
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 Comment Written 04-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023

Thanks Doug and sorry for thr late reply.
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