South Carolina
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "Sunset Drive"Beautiful poetry written primarily in this state
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this with us. Halloween is just around the corner.
It's now 3:00 AM.the Beast of the Night... (space after 'AM.' and maybe a capital on 'The', not sure maybe just a comma, and then keep 'the'. It needs something.)
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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Thank you for sharing this with us. Halloween is just around the corner.
It's now 3:00 AM.the Beast of the Night... (space after 'AM.' and maybe a capital on 'The', not sure maybe just a comma, and then keep 'the'. It needs something.)
Comment Written 04-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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Thanks again Barbara and sorry for the late reply.
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Comment from JSD
Excellent enigmatic and intriguing writing once again. Love the imagery and the unusual vocabulary which you always employ in your resonant writing. Well done.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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Excellent enigmatic and intriguing writing once again. Love the imagery and the unusual vocabulary which you always employ in your resonant writing. Well done.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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Thanks Jim and sorry for the late reply.
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Comment from Douglas Goff
Oh my goodness, Doc, are you getting into the Holiday spirit?
Halloween is right around the corner and this piece is par for the course!
Fun read. As long as we are not part of the Feast!!!!
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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Oh my goodness, Doc, are you getting into the Holiday spirit?
Halloween is right around the corner and this piece is par for the course!
Fun read. As long as we are not part of the Feast!!!!
Comment Written 03-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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Thanks again Douglas.
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