South Carolina
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Another Sunrisr"Beautiful poetry written primarily in this state
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Comment from Mia Twysted
I like the image of the rising and setting sun. It paints a picture in the mind of the reader. It was as if I was sitting out on the porch rocking in my chair while letting the last day and the new day come.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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I like the image of the rising and setting sun. It paints a picture in the mind of the reader. It was as if I was sitting out on the porch rocking in my chair while letting the last day and the new day come.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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Thanks Miss Mia and sorry for the late reply.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this inspiring post. I enjoyed reading.
As the Sun rises this again will be another Beautiful day here in South Carolina for me! (comma after 'rises) You had all the commas until the final line.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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Thank you for sharing this inspiring post. I enjoyed reading.
As the Sun rises this again will be another Beautiful day here in South Carolina for me! (comma after 'rises) You had all the commas until the final line.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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Thanks Barbara and I hope you have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky 1024