Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I think most of us, I do, enjoy sitting in silent and reflecting on many different subjects and people I once knew. I would hope all people do. Once again, this is a beautiful presentation.

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

ooh love the last line trailing off. . . into wonder. . .
great thought-provoking tanka with nice imagery and smooth flow

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I like how you leave it unknown what the "whispering breeze says." It's hard to interpret the breeze. That would dependent on our mood at the time. Lovely illustration!

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2023

Thank you, big sister. I'm enjoying looking for Art Nouveau... it inspires me.

Love

Marival

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Yes, if only thoughts could be carried to our loves on the breeze, I like the way this one makes us reflect on those times, when we do think about others and wonder if they are thinking about us, very well written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from aryr

Excellent

What a fantastic tanka, Gypsy. The pictures were priceless and they spoke the words to explained what a tangled web we weave. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.

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reply by aryr on 02-Oct-2023

Most welcome, Gypsy.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I like how you ended the poem with that beautiful last line that leaves the reader wondering. Your poem, as ususal, was beautiful. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

Beautiful. The imagery was beautiful and suggesting of peace. The line about the breeze wanting recognition showed the person's connection with the world of nature around him. Beautifully written. Gretchen

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2023

Thank you very much, Gretchen. (*÷*) I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. I hope you have a wonderful Sunday.

Gypsy hugs

reply by the author on 01-Oct-2023

Thank you very much, Gretchen. (*÷*) I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. I hope you have a wonderful Sunday.

Gypsy hugs