Rooted in Dixie
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Overcoming Fear"My early life and Southern roots
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Comment from Lea Tonin1
Wow what a cool story sharing your memories withus I thank you for that! High school can be a very scary place especially for a young Girl I too was a late bloomer they used to call me toothpick.
You're written this beautifully, and you're obviously a very talented writer. It shines through with almost every word.
I especially like that you are able to come out of it fairly unscathed and with some accolades under your belt! I see no issues with grammar sentence structure spelling or subject matter. You've done a fine job putting this together the story was clear and Left no doubt to what you were saying. Best of luck and I hope you have a great evening!
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2023
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Wow what a cool story sharing your memories withus I thank you for that! High school can be a very scary place especially for a young Girl I too was a late bloomer they used to call me toothpick.
You're written this beautifully, and you're obviously a very talented writer. It shines through with almost every word.
I especially like that you are able to come out of it fairly unscathed and with some accolades under your belt! I see no issues with grammar sentence structure spelling or subject matter. You've done a fine job putting this together the story was clear and Left no doubt to what you were saying. Best of luck and I hope you have a great evening!
Comment Written 07-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2023
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Thank you Lea. I'm so glad to enjoyed my story. I appreciate the review and I liked reading your comments.
Beth
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
No matter who we are, we will come up against a bully at sometime in our life. I have met many bullies in the workplace and some in my personal life. Women are often bullied because men think they should be in charge of women. Handling bullies is a work of art and no one should succumb to them. I am glad you overcame your fear and found people to support you Beth. In the end we always have to stick up for ourselves, make compromises and navigate a fearful world sometimes, I enjoyed your Poignant post, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2023
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No matter who we are, we will come up against a bully at sometime in our life. I have met many bullies in the workplace and some in my personal life. Women are often bullied because men think they should be in charge of women. Handling bullies is a work of art and no one should succumb to them. I am glad you overcame your fear and found people to support you Beth. In the end we always have to stick up for ourselves, make compromises and navigate a fearful world sometimes, I enjoyed your Poignant post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2023
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Thanks for the review and the comments. It has been a long time since I felt fear. I've not met a bully in quite a while. Actually, I think most of them have fears as well. They maintain a tough exterior to cover their on anxiety.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello, Beth!
I so enjoyed reading your well-crafted high school memory offering!
I could relate to so many of the scenarios you depicted.
And I laughed aloud when you described "accidentally" dropping your artwork on the library floor so the librarian could see it! Very clever.
I taught high school English and sociology for nearly twenty years; I know the fear of which you speak. My students were the "walking wounded" = those students for whom every day was a challenge of courage and perseverance...
Thank you for sharing!
Much enjoyed!
diane
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2023
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Hello, Beth!
I so enjoyed reading your well-crafted high school memory offering!
I could relate to so many of the scenarios you depicted.
And I laughed aloud when you described "accidentally" dropping your artwork on the library floor so the librarian could see it! Very clever.
I taught high school English and sociology for nearly twenty years; I know the fear of which you speak. My students were the "walking wounded" = those students for whom every day was a challenge of courage and perseverance...
Thank you for sharing!
Much enjoyed!
diane
Comment Written 07-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2023
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Thank you Diane. I'm so glad you liked me story. A lot of people have said they can relate. So young people seem confident and self-assured but maybe it is partly a mask we wear to cover our insecurities.
Comment from Loren .
Whenever I see a writer back a post I think it must somehow be special to them. A special moment recalled a chance to reflect and share something about themselves or of life itself. You have written here something, I believe, everyone can identify with. Loren
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2023
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Whenever I see a writer back a post I think it must somehow be special to them. A special moment recalled a chance to reflect and share something about themselves or of life itself. You have written here something, I believe, everyone can identify with. Loren
Comment Written 07-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2023
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Everything I write is in someway special to me. It may not be to anyone else, but It's my baby,and I want it to do well. When you put something in a blind contest not many see it and wanted to at least be recognized. Thank you making that happen. I appreciate your comments.
Beth
Comment from lyenochka
Congratulations on your second place finish!! I knew about you winning the art contest in high school but this one gives us a lot more information including how much you had to overcome to get to know the librarian. And boy, did she put you in a stressful situation. But like you concluded, it was a good preparation for life!
Suggestions:
at the kid's table. (kids')
toward the book shelves (bookshelves)
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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2023
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Congratulations on your second place finish!! I knew about you winning the art contest in high school but this one gives us a lot more information including how much you had to overcome to get to know the librarian. And boy, did she put you in a stressful situation. But like you concluded, it was a good preparation for life!
Suggestions:
at the kid's table. (kids')
toward the book shelves (bookshelves)
paper?" She asked. (she) - speech tags aren't capitalized.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the review. I hoped to get enough to at least have it recognized. Many of my stories have things in them I've written about before but writing them again from member usually includes a few more details. You have a good memory of what I wrote earlier. I appreciate you pointing out things that needed work.
Comment from RodG
I think any incoming freshman would benefit from reading this story. The narrator clarifies her fears of entering high school. I really like the scene where you get Ms. Edwards to see your artwork "accidentally," and you wind up making posters. High school can be very frightening, but do not give in to your fears. This message is very well conveyed. Rod
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2023
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I think any incoming freshman would benefit from reading this story. The narrator clarifies her fears of entering high school. I really like the scene where you get Ms. Edwards to see your artwork "accidentally," and you wind up making posters. High school can be very frightening, but do not give in to your fears. This message is very well conveyed. Rod
Comment Written 06-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2023
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Thank you for an excellent review. I enjoyed your comments.
Beth
Comment from Ric Myworld
Your story is very well written and enjoyable to read. I think most anyone to reads it will be able to relate to what you're saying in some way. Great job and thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2023
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Your story is very well written and enjoyable to read. I think most anyone to reads it will be able to relate to what you're saying in some way. Great job and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2023
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Thank Ric. I really appreciate you reviewing and commenting on my high school story.
Beth
Comment from Thesis
I enjoyed your story and the perspective it was written in. The change from Gramer School to High School does create much anxiety, as you've shown bringing out the insecurities that change creates. Nice job with this one.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2023
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I enjoyed your story and the perspective it was written in. The change from Gramer School to High School does create much anxiety, as you've shown bringing out the insecurities that change creates. Nice job with this one.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much for a great review. I really appreciate your comments. How long have you been on FanStory. I remember someone with your name I thought was my fan back years ago when I was on FanStory the first time. I was here for 2009 to 2013.
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It was probably me, I've been here since 2009.
Comment from Wendy G
An interesting set of high school memories. A few similarities with Australian high schools but quite a few differences. It seemed harsh for her to insist you did a chalk talk, but as you say, such experiences of overcoming fear are good preparation for life.
Wendy
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2023
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An interesting set of high school memories. A few similarities with Australian high schools but quite a few differences. It seemed harsh for her to insist you did a chalk talk, but as you say, such experiences of overcoming fear are good preparation for life.
Wendy
Comment Written 03-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2023
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Thank you Wendy. I thought insisting that I do that was a bit over the top. She let me know she believed in my ability, but she let me down by not providing a proper easel. I also should have had a chance to rehearse on stage.
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Yes, you are right on both counts. She should have offered practical support instead of just throwing you in at the deep end
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
You certainly explained the highs and lows of high school. How lucky you were with the librarian. I got good librarians in elementary school and intermediate school, And it seems most librarians are stern until you get to know them. I sure thought they were dragons at the gate until they took an interest in me because of how fast I read and what I read. They lead
me to new writers , and found me more books on whatever I was reading at the time. How lucky we were. Karen
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2023
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You certainly explained the highs and lows of high school. How lucky you were with the librarian. I got good librarians in elementary school and intermediate school, And it seems most librarians are stern until you get to know them. I sure thought they were dragons at the gate until they took an interest in me because of how fast I read and what I read. They lead
me to new writers , and found me more books on whatever I was reading at the time. How lucky we were. Karen
Comment Written 03-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much for a nice review. I enjoyed your comments and learning about your experiences with the librarians in you life.
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keep writing, I'll keep reading
