Comment from angel123

Excellent

Your poem is well written, and your message is exceptional. I'm sorry I ran out of six stars. Your poem flows well, and you followed the syllable count and referenced an aspect of human nature. I like your artwork choice and I have no suggestions for any changes. Best wishes!

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2023

Thanks so much for your kind words.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written Senyru you have penned for the writing prompt contest. Very good art work to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023

Thank you so much.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Oh my goodness that is quite a picture and your words are powerful and true and climate change is with us, a fine Senryu for the contest, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023

Thanks your review means so much.

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Incredible image fittingly complemented by your very cleverly worded senryu. The imagery is first-class and I particularly like your "protesting" and "temperatures rise" which reflect so powerfully the impact of man's irresponsibility. Well done! And good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023

Your outstanding review made my day.

reply by Debbie D'Arcy on 30-Sep-2023

I think it's a very strong contender.