2023 Gypsy's Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 66 "~ While I Sleep ~"x
8 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
Very, very nice Haiku posting. Do like how your color scheme and artwork pair nicely with your verse. Your imagery is well displayed throughout.
Mark
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Gypsy,
Very, very nice Haiku posting. Do like how your color scheme and artwork pair nicely with your verse. Your imagery is well displayed throughout.
Mark
Comment Written 30-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. May you have a wonderful night.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
What a fantastic haiku, Gypsy. The pictures were wonderful- first of the sleeping lady then the flower. Your words were unique in that they encompass the whole sleep mode. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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What a fantastic haiku, Gypsy. The pictures were wonderful- first of the sleeping lady then the flower. Your words were unique in that they encompass the whole sleep mode. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 30-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words. May you have a wonderful weekend. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, I enjoyed this, Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
ooh cool pic! she looks very comfy in her dreams...
very good haiku - like the comparison between a starry sky and a calm sea
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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ooh cool pic! she looks very comfy in her dreams...
very good haiku - like the comparison between a starry sky and a calm sea
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 30-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This poem and the presentation share a beautiful and vivid image with us. I can visualize the numerous twinkling stars over the calm sea, and I see their reflection in the water. Thank you for sharing this peaceful image with us.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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This poem and the presentation share a beautiful and vivid image with us. I can visualize the numerous twinkling stars over the calm sea, and I see their reflection in the water. Thank you for sharing this peaceful image with us.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
I enjoyed this haiku. It has a gentle feeling throughout, is correct as a good example of haiku with well chosen words, and the picture to illustrate it does so to perfection.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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I enjoyed this haiku. It has a gentle feeling throughout, is correct as a good example of haiku with well chosen words, and the picture to illustrate it does so to perfection.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
Nothing is as peaceful as the "starry sky's canopy" and the thought of the sky and the soothing lullaby of the sea makes for a perfect night's sleep. A lovely haiku!
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Nothing is as peaceful as the "starry sky's canopy" and the thought of the sky and the soothing lullaby of the sea makes for a perfect night's sleep. A lovely haiku!
Comment Written 30-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much, Big Sister. Hearing from you is always wonderful. I hope you are having an excellent weekend.... and restful LoL
love,
marival
Comment from r. xmas
Hello,
This was a great haiku it was only a few lines but it was so calming and melted great with the picture.Your talking about the night sky but it was way more elegant really nice work.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Hello,
This was a great haiku it was only a few lines but it was so calming and melted great with the picture.Your talking about the night sky but it was way more elegant really nice work.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
I remember a friend in college who painted her ceiling and walls an indigo blue. She painted dayglo stars all over it and had a wall of different plants. She anchored a hammock to the walls. It did wonders for her anxiety ... at least, until her landlord found out. Your poem made me flash back. Great poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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I remember a friend in college who painted her ceiling and walls an indigo blue. She painted dayglo stars all over it and had a wall of different plants. She anchored a hammock to the walls. It did wonders for her anxiety ... at least, until her landlord found out. Your poem made me flash back. Great poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 29-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Sounds like a beautiful bedroom. Great idea.
Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs