My Saviour
A 5-Line Poem16 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
This is very well done, are you going to include pictures with each poem in your book? You need to see if your work will be well received. Try to enter a few poetry contests outside here. There are many Christian publishing houses out there. Check out a few. Good luck. Karen
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2023
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This is very well done, are you going to include pictures with each poem in your book? You need to see if your work will be well received. Try to enter a few poetry contests outside here. There are many Christian publishing houses out there. Check out a few. Good luck. Karen
Comment Written 02-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2023
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Thank you, Karen, I really don't think I have a book in me, I have some "card" companies in mind, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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Just off the top of my head,"Hallmark",Blue Mountain, abc greetings and 123 Greetings. And sometimes they cantell you where to send your work if they can't use it.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Kym,
Beautiful 5 line poem entry for the contest. I love the presentation is beautiful. The message is very spiritual and heartfelt.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2023
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Hello, Kym,
Beautiful 5 line poem entry for the contest. I love the presentation is beautiful. The message is very spiritual and heartfelt.
Gypsy
Comment Written 01-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2023
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Thank you, Gypsy, for your very encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, I remember the day and the time I received the Holy Spirt, that made my life so different from the goalless existence I led before it. I was baptised, filled with the Spirit, and became newly birthed on the 22nd February 1984, at about 2pm, well done Kim, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Oh yes, I remember the day and the time I received the Holy Spirt, that made my life so different from the goalless existence I led before it. I was baptised, filled with the Spirit, and became newly birthed on the 22nd February 1984, at about 2pm, well done Kim, blessings Roy
Comment Written 30-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Wow! Thank, Roy, for your wonderful comments and very generous stars, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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Good job
Comment from Eleri
This poem has the correct form for the contest but I think you mean that darkness vanished when enlightenment came. Your poem currently reads as though the darkness vanished and then enlightenment came. I think you need to rethink it a bit to make it much clearer
Eleri
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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This poem has the correct form for the contest but I think you mean that darkness vanished when enlightenment came. Your poem currently reads as though the darkness vanished and then enlightenment came. I think you need to rethink it a bit to make it much clearer
Eleri
Comment Written 30-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Jamison Brown
Your poem is an eternal message of hope and inspiration. The words feel natural, unforced, and effortless. The presentation adds impact and spiritual clarity to the message.
The juxtaposition of "darkness" and "enlightened" is masterful.
Thanks for sharing this, kahpot. I will refer to it often. - Jamison
NOTE: Since your message is spiritual and refers to your Saviour, you might consider capitalizing "you" in the last line.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Your poem is an eternal message of hope and inspiration. The words feel natural, unforced, and effortless. The presentation adds impact and spiritual clarity to the message.
The juxtaposition of "darkness" and "enlightened" is masterful.
Thanks for sharing this, kahpot. I will refer to it often. - Jamison
NOTE: Since your message is spiritual and refers to your Saviour, you might consider capitalizing "you" in the last line.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Thank you, my friend, good pick up, I have adjusted, your encouraging comments and six stars have made my day, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Ric Myworld
A whole lot said with so few words, giving witness to those who might be searching and not yet found that light to brighten up their own lives. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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A whole lot said with so few words, giving witness to those who might be searching and not yet found that light to brighten up their own lives. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Bill Schott
This five-line poem, My Savior, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers of the connection we make when we accept the grace and friendship of God.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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This five-line poem, My Savior, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers of the connection we make when we accept the grace and friendship of God.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Well said for you individually and yet it holds the promise to be for the world as follows:
Never
will
darkness vanish
until you decide
to invite Him into your life.
or something to that effect. Do as you please with the idea. It's yours with no charge. Payment for sharing your testimony.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Well said for you individually and yet it holds the promise to be for the world as follows:
Never
will
darkness vanish
until you decide
to invite Him into your life.
or something to that effect. Do as you please with the idea. It's yours with no charge. Payment for sharing your testimony.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Thankyou, Tom, I will have a look at that, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from JSD
A sweet poem giving convincing voice to your faith and the change in your life that occurred when you found God. Neatly conveyed in a brief five lines. Well done, and good luck.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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A sweet poem giving convincing voice to your faith and the change in your life that occurred when you found God. Neatly conveyed in a brief five lines. Well done, and good luck.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine faithful post and I have heard of people who have suddenly become believers late in life and have enjoyed the comfort of faith, a fine post, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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A fine faithful post and I have heard of people who have suddenly become believers late in life and have enjoyed the comfort of faith, a fine post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
