Comment from angel123

Excellent

Go right ahead and shed your tears of happiness. I like your light-hearted poem. You brought joy to the world and thank you for sharing it with us here on the site. I wish you shared an artwork choice, but your words paint a picture of pink balloons, flowers, candy and presents. I have no suggestions for any changes. Best wishes!

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2023

Thank you so much for your lovely review!

reply by angel123 on 01-Oct-2023

Best wishes!

reply by the author on 01-Oct-2023

Best wishes to you too!

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Babies bring us those special joys in life, congratulations on the birth of your baby, a fine Senryu, I wish you luck with the contest, this is uplifting, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Sep-2023

To be honest, I didn?t have a baby! I am just imagining what it will be like when I do! Thank you! x
Kristen

reply by Dolly'sPoems on 30-Sep-2023

You have that pleasure to come x

reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023

Thank you! x

Comment from RodG

Good

There is nothing so wonderful as welcoming a newborn into your life. In your case, those are tears of joy. But BEAUTIFUL is used too often in poetry. Consult your thesaurus and find a better word.

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Sep-2023

Okay! Lol! Thank you!