Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

This poem touched my heart. I have often wondered why or how God allows innocent children to suffer. It doesn't make sense to me. It's one of God's many mysteries. Your presentation was beautiful.

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Sep-2023

Thank you very much , Barbara.

I appreciate your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

like the googly eyes on the mask lol -- a sad, thought-provoking katauta with a cute pic, good imagery, and smooth flow -- nice.

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023

Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words. May you have a wonderful weekend.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

Man, this was heavy. As you know I work at a pharmacy. I see people pulling their oxygen tanks behind them several times per week. Thankfully, I haven't seen any children with one. This poem awesome me stop and thank God that my children are all healthy and to send up a prayer those children who are less fortunate. Gretchen

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023

Yes, I thank God all my children are healthy. I hate it when I see a little kid sick.

Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words. May you have a wonderful weekend.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

A wonderful read, it must be so hard for the child and the parents to see their little girl like the moth, but different, one jar is saving a life, very well written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2023

Thank you very much, my friend, I appreciate your kind review.

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Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Gypsy, this is a very interesting and well written KaTauta you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the artwork you chose. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2023

Thank you very much, my friend, I appreciate your kind review.

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Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

This is a good comparison of what we do to care for life. Even the moth's life has value. But if a family is caring for a child whose health is in crisis, pets tend to get less attention.

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2023

Thank you very much, big sister, I appreciate your kind review.

love,
marival

Comment from Jumbo J

Excellent

Hi MariVal,
If only the moth was prized as much as the sick child?

This is one of your poems, this one a Katauta... that lingers, demands the reader to reassess all angles to the correlation of the moth and the sick child... I guess only one has received the life line required, while the other waits for a certain lingering death. It makes me think of the disparity across the globe in concerns with health care and the way it's handed out to some, and out of reach to others, especially children.

Beautiful work... really motivates the power of after-thought!

With our thoughts we create...
oxygenated inquiry.

Warmest regards,
James.

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2023

Thank you very much, James, I always appreciate your detailed and intuitive reviews. Thank you for taking the time. I hope you don't get in trouble with your lioness LoL

Warmest regards
marival