Scenes at a Third Party
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Comment from Ulla
Hahaha, I wish I had a six. Oh this is just too funny Bill. You take the piss out of them all in this real world. Please excuse my blunt language. I love it. I need to to read on. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Hahaha, I wish I had a six. Oh this is just too funny Bill. You take the piss out of them all in this real world. Please excuse my blunt language. I love it. I need to to read on. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 30-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Ulla. Hope I can get them to the 2024 election.
Comment from Loren .
This is probably my fault in that I am coming in mid way in this scenario, but it does sound like they are all in some kind of nut house and everyone believes the other no matter how nutty. But it is fun seeing everyone getting along. Loren
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2023
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This is probably my fault in that I am coming in mid way in this scenario, but it does sound like they are all in some kind of nut house and everyone believes the other no matter how nutty. But it is fun seeing everyone getting along. Loren
Comment Written 29-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2023
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It is pretty convoluted, Loren. Hard to even summarize.
Comment from lyenochka
Things just get wilder all the time. And those candidates don't seem to be clear on what they are running for. I think maybe they all need a geography refresher course. I look forward to the joint poem!
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2023
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Things just get wilder all the time. And those candidates don't seem to be clear on what they are running for. I think maybe they all need a geography refresher course. I look forward to the joint poem!
Comment Written 29-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2023
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I was going to recycle an old Fox and Felix script, but since I'm down to about seven readers, and all of them have read it already, I guess I won*t.
Comment from nomi338
That is the thing with poets, They will create if necessary, a reason to write or recite a poem, or two, written just for you. Did you see what I did right there? Now, where was I? It seems this campaign has reached a fever pitch of confusion. People are missing, some may have even gone fishing. No one wants to fill the position they have been nominated for. Why didn't you just call them Republicans?
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2023
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That is the thing with poets, They will create if necessary, a reason to write or recite a poem, or two, written just for you. Did you see what I did right there? Now, where was I? It seems this campaign has reached a fever pitch of confusion. People are missing, some may have even gone fishing. No one wants to fill the position they have been nominated for. Why didn't you just call them Republicans?
Comment Written 29-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2023
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How about Demonicans?
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Sounds good, I'll take it.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is such a silly satire which I have to read a couple of times to take in all the name changes and sheer joy you're having with this script. Love Mau Mau's interpretation of Minister of Defense and the explanation of GED's name. So what's going on between GED and Ned then? Crazy but probably not so far removed from reality after all! Looking forward to reading more, Debbie
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2023
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This is such a silly satire which I have to read a couple of times to take in all the name changes and sheer joy you're having with this script. Love Mau Mau's interpretation of Minister of Defense and the explanation of GED's name. So what's going on between GED and Ned then? Crazy but probably not so far removed from reality after all! Looking forward to reading more, Debbie
Comment Written 29-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2023
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Starting with *DED and Ned* on September 19, I began this necessity for Death **DED** to claim a soul. DED has never wanted to take Ned and once again has found a way past it. GED, Ned's clone. In *Scene at a Third Party 14* DED exchanges Ned for GED.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Hello,
Your dialogue and stage directions are funny. What would be a funny script too (since I don't write them maybe you will) Trump returns more classified papers in boxes and mixed in they find other odd things that he took. Like one sock from the maid, oddly. That kind of thing. Or something like that. I used to write scrots as. Kid for us to act our. Little House on TBS Prairie (the Lost Scenes), and stuff like that. lol not kidding.
Suggestion, you used
yer but you could use yur
Just saying. :)
No. I take that back yer is better. And, I've helped people get GEDs so, they are perfectly respectable. Maybe the GOP needs thatreadibg program from the 80s that had commercials, "Hooked in Phonics" �
And what kind of gesture does one make, with his or her head that encourages people to leave?
Raise their chin a couple times? It's gotta be that.
Alex â??ï¸?ð???
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2023
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Hello,
Your dialogue and stage directions are funny. What would be a funny script too (since I don't write them maybe you will) Trump returns more classified papers in boxes and mixed in they find other odd things that he took. Like one sock from the maid, oddly. That kind of thing. Or something like that. I used to write scrots as. Kid for us to act our. Little House on TBS Prairie (the Lost Scenes), and stuff like that. lol not kidding.
Suggestion, you used
yer but you could use yur
Just saying. :)
No. I take that back yer is better. And, I've helped people get GEDs so, they are perfectly respectable. Maybe the GOP needs thatreadibg program from the 80s that had commercials, "Hooked in Phonics" �
And what kind of gesture does one make, with his or her head that encourages people to leave?
Raise their chin a couple times? It's gotta be that.
Alex â??ï¸?ð???
Comment Written 29-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2023
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I think raising your chin means *Come here*. AA might have widened her eyes and tilted her head in the direction of the exit.
Comment from kahpot
Yep, here we go, I hope Ned as a lot to do with the poem,
(now there's a challenge) I like the ideas your characters are having about the disappearances, and how they might have come about, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2023
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Yep, here we go, I hope Ned as a lot to do with the poem,
(now there's a challenge) I like the ideas your characters are having about the disappearances, and how they might have come about, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 29-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2023
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Thank you, kahpot.