Comment from aryr

Excellent

The free verse was spectacular, Gypsy. The pictures were priceless because they showed that love can wait. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Another romance poem. I really enjoyed reading this this. As I have come to expect, your presentation was perfect. Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent with us.

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2023

Thank you very much, Barbara, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Have a wonderful day.

Gypsy

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

is there a blanket on that grass? because lying on grass is kinda icky LOL

great free verse with great imagery

though your notes say "no capital letters" ... you have 2: 1st line and 5th line ;-)

anyway, very dreamy free verse with good imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2023

I always use caps for ''I'' everything else is low caps.

I have been having horrible mosquito bite itching. It kept me up all night. I didn't sit on the grass but I did go to the park with my grandson.

Thank you very much, Shelley, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Have a wonderful day.

Gypsy

reply by shelley kaye on 28-Sep-2023

mosquitos love both me and my daughter!

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

That she waits for him in "lush grass" sounds so inviting. She seems to wait all day "between the sun and moon" as she anticipates communing with him. A passionate free verse!

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2023

yes, yet again, another tragic love... I am going to be known for it on fanstory LoL I just go through moods and I do love a love tanka.

Thank you, big sister. How are you? Busy with family? I bet you are and that is a good thing. I've been thinking about you.

love,
marival

reply by lyenochka on 28-Sep-2023

Thank you! Yes, busy with lots of things and still unpacking! Maybe for another year! lol

reply by the author on 29-Sep-2023

Well I think with the family is the right kind of busy. Moving boxes sucks. 📦 😔

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

It is agony waiting for loves return, the expectation, the not knowing, if and or when, or even if it will be returned in kind, very well written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2023

Thank you very much, Kym.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

This was wonderful. I love the lush details. Your poetry never leaving me lacking in the emotion department. I feel I am on a spiritual retreat when I read your work. Another winner. Gretchen

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2023

Thank you very much, Gretchen. I used to go to spiritual, zen meditation, and new age retreats. I haven't in a long time.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

So simply expressed but with a sense of compelling connection between the soul and nature in this verse of love. Nicely done! Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Take care Debbie

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This poem practically aches. You did a wonderful job with your words. It's something to which many people can relate. Thank you so much for sharing this, and best wishes to you yet again.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs