Miranda's Trouble In Paradise
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Odd Behavior"Miranda tries to find Dougie.
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Hmm, I don't trust Missy, even though she is in prison. I think Miranda should at glance over the letters she sends, she might learn something that might be happening soon. A bottle at the post box, and Miranda had just emptied the box and didn't notice it? Hmm. got to have happened between then and now. Okay, at least I can learn more faster!! Lol. Off to the next chapter. Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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Hmm, I don't trust Missy, even though she is in prison. I think Miranda should at glance over the letters she sends, she might learn something that might be happening soon. A bottle at the post box, and Miranda had just emptied the box and didn't notice it? Hmm. got to have happened between then and now. Okay, at least I can learn more faster!! Lol. Off to the next chapter. Sandra xxx
Comment Written 27-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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Thanks. She might have been preoccupied and didn't notice. Who knows. Thanks for the great review. Gretchen
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
OOOOOOOOOh, seriously creepy, really. I love it. I usually read one for one. I am hooked here. I can't believe you never read "Herman" I won my first place ribbon with that. I was so proud I was force-feeding that story to everyone on the known universe. haha
Karen
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2023
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OOOOOOOOOh, seriously creepy, really. I love it. I usually read one for one. I am hooked here. I can't believe you never read "Herman" I won my first place ribbon with that. I was so proud I was force-feeding that story to everyone on the known universe. haha
Karen
Comment Written 02-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2023
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I'll go check it out soon. Thank you for this. Gretchen
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I so with Miranda would share this with Mitch, but I know she's not and is going to get herself into trouble. That's who she is. I really like this story.
No I'm not a pumpkin spice latte kind of girl. (comma needed after 'No')
I ask as he climbs the steps to plop down next to me. (plop down beside me)
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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I so with Miranda would share this with Mitch, but I know she's not and is going to get herself into trouble. That's who she is. I really like this story.
No I'm not a pumpkin spice latte kind of girl. (comma needed after 'No')
I ask as he climbs the steps to plop down next to me. (plop down beside me)
Comment Written 27-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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Thank you so much. Gretchen
Comment from BethShelby
The mystery deepens. I aways enjoy your stories because they are always interesting and keep me coming back for more. It seems you have two separate thing going that Miranda is trying to discover. Whether Bill is cheating on his wife and what happed to Dougie. I will be waiting for more.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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The mystery deepens. I aways enjoy your stories because they are always interesting and keep me coming back for more. It seems you have two separate thing going that Miranda is trying to discover. Whether Bill is cheating on his wife and what happed to Dougie. I will be waiting for more.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Thanks, Beth, so glad you liked it. Gretchen
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Gretchen,
I like the way you always put a lot of description into your writing. I feel like I'm right there in the car waiting for Mr. Bill to come out of the hardware store. I'm a little curious about what he bought in the store that he spent an hour in, and if it in any remote way had anything to do with his next stop. Well done gal.
Blessings,
Tom
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Hello Gretchen,
I like the way you always put a lot of description into your writing. I feel like I'm right there in the car waiting for Mr. Bill to come out of the hardware store. I'm a little curious about what he bought in the store that he spent an hour in, and if it in any remote way had anything to do with his next stop. Well done gal.
Blessings,
Tom
Comment Written 26-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Hard to imagine what he could find in a hardware store to use in a club. Lol. Thanks so much. Gretchen
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Imagination is a wonderful thing. There seems to be no limit to what people will think of the get their jollies.
Comment from royowen
Things are just rolling along, but there ate enough oddities for Miranda to be interested. I love pragmatic people who despise the trimmings of hypocrisy, I simply don't have the energy for psychological games. To me a spade is a spade, no more, no less, I don't understand people who are sneaky, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Things are just rolling along, but there ate enough oddities for Miranda to be interested. I love pragmatic people who despise the trimmings of hypocrisy, I simply don't have the energy for psychological games. To me a spade is a spade, no more, no less, I don't understand people who are sneaky, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 25-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Thank you so much for this. Gretchen
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Well done
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I like the name..."the Garden of Eden Mobile Home Park." LoL
I love your stories and the characters you create giving them life on paper. I like the way Miranda continues to investigate. I used to drink beer, I don't anymore, and Miranda's drinking it brought memories.
Well done, Gretchen.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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I like the name..."the Garden of Eden Mobile Home Park." LoL
I love your stories and the characters you create giving them life on paper. I like the way Miranda continues to investigate. I used to drink beer, I don't anymore, and Miranda's drinking it brought memories.
Well done, Gretchen.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 25-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Thanks so much, Gypsy. Glad you enjoyed this. Gretchen
Comment from JSD
Intriguing and exciting. Well done. A great continuation and an engaging read, as usual. The recalcitrant son, particularly, is depicted through good dialogue and effective characterisation.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Intriguing and exciting. Well done. A great continuation and an engaging read, as usual. The recalcitrant son, particularly, is depicted through good dialogue and effective characterisation.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Thanks so much! Gretchen
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A good update to the story Gretchen. A smooth read. Not sure if I know the full story here as I may have missed some chapters. It sounds like the plot is thickening and Miranda is no fool, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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A good update to the story Gretchen. A smooth read. Not sure if I know the full story here as I may have missed some chapters. It sounds like the plot is thickening and Miranda is no fool, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Thanks so much. I'm glad you liked what you read. Gretchen
Comment from nancy_e_davis
This is a good chapter. Interesting. I felt like She was talking directly to me. I do enjoy Miranda and her thoughts. LOL I think you know that by now. Well done, Gretchen. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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This is a good chapter. Interesting. I felt like She was talking directly to me. I do enjoy Miranda and her thoughts. LOL I think you know that by now. Well done, Gretchen. Nancy:)
Comment Written 25-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2023
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Thank you so much. Sorry it took me so long to respond. Gretchen