Scenes at a Third Party
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Comment from BethShelby
I kind of figured that Ded might have decided to take to the Ned's clone instead of Ned. I vote for Ded to take Scar next. These conspiracy freaks have too many clones running around loose. They've cloned Elvis, Hilary, JFK and John, Obama, and Joe BIden plus most of the movie stars..
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2023
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I kind of figured that Ded might have decided to take to the Ned's clone instead of Ned. I vote for Ded to take Scar next. These conspiracy freaks have too many clones running around loose. They've cloned Elvis, Hilary, JFK and John, Obama, and Joe BIden plus most of the movie stars..
Comment Written 28-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2023
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Send in the clones.
Comment from kahpot
If I may, the photo seems too good for the characters Ha! Ha! I am happy to read that Ned has returned, though I fear he may still be in some trouble? another very humorous read, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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If I may, the photo seems too good for the characters Ha! Ha! I am happy to read that Ned has returned, though I fear he may still be in some trouble? another very humorous read, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 26-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Thank you, kahpot. As you can see, DED and his band of scary men are in and out of Pons and Ned as well.
Comment from nomi338
Neat trick. The ability to appear, disappear, and reappear as a dramatic device works very well. It allows the creative talent to think up another plot development. Creating multiple characters is also a useful device.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Neat trick. The ability to appear, disappear, and reappear as a dramatic device works very well. It allows the creative talent to think up another plot development. Creating multiple characters is also a useful device.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Thank you, nomi
Comment from Ricky1024
Another brilliant chapter of your book.
Well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Another brilliant chapter of your book.
Well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 26-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Thanks, Doc
Comment from JSD
I guess that's a picture of you provided to accompany your post. What a handsome chap you are. More hilarious ideas from you here. I hope that the next televised debate will involve noodle-bashing. How much fun would that be?
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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I guess that's a picture of you provided to accompany your post. What a handsome chap you are. More hilarious ideas from you here. I hope that the next televised debate will involve noodle-bashing. How much fun would that be?
Comment Written 26-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Thanks, John. This used to be called "fair fighting" where the 'combatants' were armed with a non-injury-producing 'weapon'.
Comment from lyenochka
Oh Whew!! You had me worried for Ned there. But I hope GED will not keep D-red in check since they all went the same direction. I liked the attacks with pool noodles and the comeback about "Wonder Woman."
everyone beligerent. (belligerent) you probably fixed already.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Oh Whew!! You had me worried for Ned there. But I hope GED will not keep D-red in check since they all went the same direction. I liked the attacks with pool noodles and the comeback about "Wonder Woman."
everyone beligerent. (belligerent) you probably fixed already.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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I am thinking about beginning a series called "Deceasil DED, Agent of D.E.A.T.H."
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LoL !