Rise Again
3rd Place7 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are engaging, descriptive and creative. I found these
words clearly stating what happened in this scene. The words of this
poem were heartfelt, sad, and upsetting. The feelings described in these
words were intense and extremely painful! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork goes well with both the theme and words of this poem.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2023
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The author's words are engaging, descriptive and creative. I found these
words clearly stating what happened in this scene. The words of this
poem were heartfelt, sad, and upsetting. The feelings described in these
words were intense and extremely painful! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork goes well with both the theme and words of this poem.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2023
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Thank you Harmony. This one did come from a bad place, but I have risen again.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Nice work. Although your picture under the poem gives you away. There is someone on this site, that has made it her job to correct, and threaten to report to Tom anything she deems not following her rules, so I would be careful if I were you. Excellent job here.
Karen
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2023
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Nice work. Although your picture under the poem gives you away. There is someone on this site, that has made it her job to correct, and threaten to report to Tom anything she deems not following her rules, so I would be careful if I were you. Excellent job here.
Karen
Comment Written 24-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2023
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How does my picture give me away? Ohhh, the person you are thinking I am has guided me in poetry. I'm not who you think I am. Ha!
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Glad to hear it. I was worried the rule lady would turn you in.
Since you are not the you I thought you were, you are safe from her grasp. Karen
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, D,
Excellent entry for the 10 Line Poem writing prompt contest. Your poem sounds familiar. Have you met my ex-husband? LoL
I love the presentation and imagery... it also looks familiar. Great Phoenix rising from the ashes of deception. The rhyme doesn't sound forced and flows well. I wish you the best in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2023
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Hello, D,
Excellent entry for the 10 Line Poem writing prompt contest. Your poem sounds familiar. Have you met my ex-husband? LoL
I love the presentation and imagery... it also looks familiar. Great Phoenix rising from the ashes of deception. The rhyme doesn't sound forced and flows well. I wish you the best in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 24-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2023
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Ha! You have tweaked my skills, not only directly, but just from reviewing your many works. I do so appreciate you. I'm not too worried about that contest. They fall where they fall. What is awesome is that I feel much better about my poetry abilities than ever before. Thank you!
Douglas
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I voted for you :)
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Opps. I just wanted you to see how much you have helped me
Comment from Jane Jane King
Very powerful poem, expressing the anguish of betrayal. The line your love proved so cheap ties in well with a cheap fling. But people do feel better after a while. It just takes time.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2023
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Very powerful poem, expressing the anguish of betrayal. The line your love proved so cheap ties in well with a cheap fling. But people do feel better after a while. It just takes time.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2023
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Thank you! This was about my first marriage. I have risen again and am re-married and have a wonderful life with two more children. So yes, it does take awhile, but you do recover.
Comment from l.raven
your poem is very well written...
has great rhythm and rhyme...and
a great presentation...
once you have been betrayed...it's
memories never forgotten...a movie repeated...
where did I go wrong???...
you will rise again...only to be guarded...
I love your poem...very well written...Love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2023
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your poem is very well written...
has great rhythm and rhyme...and
a great presentation...
once you have been betrayed...it's
memories never forgotten...a movie repeated...
where did I go wrong???...
you will rise again...only to be guarded...
I love your poem...very well written...Love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 24-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Linda! I believe this is the first time you have reviewed me and it is an awesome one! I did read about your two system troubles and as a newbie it had me scratching my head. I hope it does not lead to you or other 'old-school' writers leaving. We need your input, wisdom, and reviews to guide us. Experience is an extremely valuable tool and component of FS.
Thank you for your kind words!
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the old FanStory was a better site...
more open...easier to get around on...
and it's missed by a lot of people...
but either way...there are some amazing writers and people on here...and if you should ever need help...just PM me and I'll help you if I can...or tell you someone who can help you...we are a family...and I want to welcome you here...
I have been off and on for couple years...but hope my muse is coming home from vacation soon...
Thank You for a wonderful reply...
and your so very welcome...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Betrayal is horrible and all innocence disappears when we deceit takes a seat in a relationship and it crushes all the love that has been carefully nurtured, a poignant write, well chosen words with a powerful message, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
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Betrayal is horrible and all innocence disappears when we deceit takes a seat in a relationship and it crushes all the love that has been carefully nurtured, a poignant write, well chosen words with a powerful message, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 22-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Miss Dolly. Back on track.
Comment from Eleri
Sorry but I cannot see your poem as the background is black. You need to change that ASAP as otherwise no one will be able to review or even read your work.
Eleri
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
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Sorry but I cannot see your poem as the background is black. You need to change that ASAP as otherwise no one will be able to review or even read your work.
Eleri
Comment Written 22-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
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Sorry. Actually I had accidentally deleted it. OMG. Thanks for catching that. D