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Sweet Wine

Drinking her enchanting sweetness.

2 total reviews 
Comment from JSD
Excellent
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Bit saucy in tone but only slightly embarrassing. The imagery you use is effective, especially at the end with the chasing of 'Lonely'. Goos luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 23-Sep-2023
    Thank you for the read and feedback. Wonder how well some readers would take the sauce.
reply by JSD on 23-Sep-2023
    Should have been 'good'. Sorry.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2023
    Ok, no problem.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a sensual write full of passion and sweet love and I enjoyed your journey through this lovers encounter, a fine 10 liner for the contest, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2023

reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
    Thank you for the read and feedback. So pleased you enjoyed the write. xxx