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Aiona's Poems

Viewing comments for Chapter 170 "Hankies"
Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.

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Comment from Enrico Langfordino
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And who in their right minds would contradict ? Handsome as he is, he'd need a gargantuan 'kerchief' should he ever develop a runny nose. How diverse is nature Aiona. I bet he can poke his nose into all kinds of places !

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
    Thank you for your review, Enrico. Yeah, he does have a big ole schnauz, doesn't he?
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Aiona,
Not many use handkerchiefs anymore. They do look pretty until they are used though. I would think they would retain the germs once used for blowing a nose and spread it.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Enjoy the day.
Joan

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
    Thank you for your review, Joan. I hope you're staying healthy too!
reply by dragonpoet on 17-Oct-2023
    Your welcome, Aiona.
    Joan
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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This is an excellent poem. I enjoyed reading it. Your presentation is very good. My mom always had white hankies. Good idea.You use descriptive words and colorful imagery that draw in a reader.

Best wishes!

Alexandra


 Comment Written 21-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
    Thanks for your review, Alexandra.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Nicely done! A little verse in praise of a handkerchief. Your abc poem reads smoothly, descriptively and fulfills the brief perfectly. Well done and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
    Thanks for your review, Debbie.