Life's ills.
Feeling myself?5 total reviews
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent poem. I enjoyed reading it. Your presentation is very good. You also use descriptive words and colorful imagery that draw in a reader. These are very personal words and feelings. Thank you for sharing this.
Best wishes!
Alexandra
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
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This is an excellent poem. I enjoyed reading it. Your presentation is very good. You also use descriptive words and colorful imagery that draw in a reader. These are very personal words and feelings. Thank you for sharing this.
Best wishes!
Alexandra
Comment Written 21-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
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thank you
Comment from JSD
You have a few apostrophe and spelling problems, which force me to give this a 4. Sorry: 'Life's'? In your title? 'everyone's'. 'person's'. 'unhinged' and 'indulged'. If you want to make the corrections and let me know, I can put the score up? If you care? Lol.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2023
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You have a few apostrophe and spelling problems, which force me to give this a 4. Sorry: 'Life's'? In your title? 'everyone's'. 'person's'. 'unhinged' and 'indulged'. If you want to make the corrections and let me know, I can put the score up? If you care? Lol.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2023
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thank u for the heads up JSD. I have corrected the work. sorry about that...really. I know how distasteful it is to read ones work and not find the flow enjoyable. I really do. please feel free to call me out on errors anytime.
Comment from Douglas Goff
This seemed to be a very wise thinking piece. Which I do so enjoy!
Catch:
Lies!impossibly fordged or
Imbedded in facts erased
For everyones
Enlightment!
(Spacing and spelling issue in this part)
Still, interesting and riveting!
D
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2023
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This seemed to be a very wise thinking piece. Which I do so enjoy!
Catch:
Lies!impossibly fordged or
Imbedded in facts erased
For everyones
Enlightment!
(Spacing and spelling issue in this part)
Still, interesting and riveting!
D
Comment Written 21-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2023
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I have corrected the work.Thank you.
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Great piece!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Our mind can play tricks on us at times and we think something is real when it isn't and visa versa. This poem is about being confused I think, a poignant post, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2023
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Our mind can play tricks on us at times and we think something is real when it isn't and visa versa. This poem is about being confused I think, a poignant post, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 21-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2023
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Thank you queen.
Comment from karenina
Hmmm. Interesting. Sounds like someone who is struggling to maintain equilibrium in a world full of swirling moods or perspectives. In that case, most of us would fit somewhere on this "spectrum" I believe.
There's a bit of madness in all of us...so beware the stranger who claims he's got it all together!
I feel manic like this sometimes... IS life really great or a disaster? The jury is still out!
Karenina
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2023
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Hmmm. Interesting. Sounds like someone who is struggling to maintain equilibrium in a world full of swirling moods or perspectives. In that case, most of us would fit somewhere on this "spectrum" I believe.
There's a bit of madness in all of us...so beware the stranger who claims he's got it all together!
I feel manic like this sometimes... IS life really great or a disaster? The jury is still out!
Karenina
Comment Written 20-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2023
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I have corrected the work. Thank you very much Karenina.
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NO problem. I've updated my review as well.
