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As the geese fly....2 total reviews
Comment from Eternal Muse
This is touching and a bit mysterious. Couldn't quite connect it with "the city of geese" you refer to in your author notes. Maybe, some clarify is needed.
A gorgeous picture of those clouds.
I wish you luck in the contest.
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This is touching and a bit mysterious. Couldn't quite connect it with "the city of geese" you refer to in your author notes. Maybe, some clarify is needed.
A gorgeous picture of those clouds.
I wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2023
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
i liked this piece. There is a certain duality to it which can be taken at face value and purely observation but remove the geese references and it takes on a whole other meaning.
All syllables up and ready to go!
best of luck to you
GMG
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Hi there,
i liked this piece. There is a certain duality to it which can be taken at face value and purely observation but remove the geese references and it takes on a whole other meaning.
All syllables up and ready to go!
best of luck to you
GMG
Comment Written 21-Sep-2023
