Scenes at a Third Party
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Comment from kahpot
Ned will survive, as he has real character, (I have missed another couple of chapters) I will go back, as I need to know how Ned is in this situation, last I read DED had changed his mind (I think) very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2023
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Ned will survive, as he has real character, (I have missed another couple of chapters) I will go back, as I need to know how Ned is in this situation, last I read DED had changed his mind (I think) very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 23-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2023
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I am working him through this.
Comment from BethShelby
It seems Scar and AB managed to get out jail. It sounds like Big Boy is in trouble for not talking. I thought Ned was excused from going with DED, but it appears he a ghost. Hopefully this happened before he was allowed to return.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
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It seems Scar and AB managed to get out jail. It sounds like Big Boy is in trouble for not talking. I thought Ned was excused from going with DED, but it appears he a ghost. Hopefully this happened before he was allowed to return.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
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I am taking Ned through this slowly as I expect some character shifts will affect the future of Pons and Ned.
Comment from JSD
Now there's a prompt that would set the cat among the pigeons! A hundred stanza epic! This is more fun and entertaining writing for us. Thank you.
John
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
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Now there's a prompt that would set the cat among the pigeons! A hundred stanza epic! This is more fun and entertaining writing for us. Thank you.
John
Comment Written 22-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
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Thank you, John. I wonder what amount you would have to post that at to get someone to read it?
Comment from lyenochka
Oh-oh. Why can't they hear or see Ned? Did DED really take him?
I'm not sure that Skar and AB should get off so easy with having BB arrested. But we'll see what happens to them.
Not sure I understood:
Are you asking me or life?
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
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Oh-oh. Why can't they hear or see Ned? Did DED really take him?
I'm not sure that Skar and AB should get off so easy with having BB arrested. But we'll see what happens to them.
Not sure I understood:
Are you asking me or life?
Comment Written 22-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
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The saying "Life mocks me" suggests the fates are toying with you.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Are you talking about Biden with this character Ned - he was shivering and babbling incoherently. I want to see Trump in your script. Come on. You can do it.
Well done.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
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Are you talking about Biden with this character Ned - he was shivering and babbling incoherently. I want to see Trump in your script. Come on. You can do it.
Well done.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Lisa. I doubt that either president will appear.
Comment from nomi338
Uh oh, what have you done. You better not have harmed Ned. How could you do that? Ned was on his way to getting lucky, and you may have cut him down before he could get some. That is mean and cruel.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2023
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Uh oh, what have you done. You better not have harmed Ned. How could you do that? Ned was on his way to getting lucky, and you may have cut him down before he could get some. That is mean and cruel.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2023
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It is what is called Drama.
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OK.