Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

You chose strong words to assist you in describing your emotions. Love doesn't have to be complicated if one chooses the right person. Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading.

God, want's happening to me? (what's)

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2023

Thanks Barbara and correct.
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Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

This is great and entangled!

Love this part:

Our Love Tis Pierced, Strained, Shattered, and Sustained.
Stained?

Also this is well-crafted:

Now set in Umbilical entanglements.
Cord of complicated lies.

Great work, Doc!

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2023

Had fun with this one
Doug.
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