Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I am so happy that Seth and Emma inspired another poem. I am truly honored. Also thank you for promoting my writing. You are so kind. I really appreciate you.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023

Thank you very much for the review, Barbara. Glad you like it. I really like Seth and Emma.

Gypsy

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

i'm lost in my thoughts a lot
and so are my thoughts lol

great free verse

may i suggest alternate formatting?
beauty in blue
lost
in thoughts
about him
and the way
he holds her face
gently but firm
with hands
ready to protect
and touch
her most intimate reverie


just a few thoughts ;-)

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023

Thank you but I don't like your suggestion, but it's not me. I always try to write full thoughts in each line.

Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy hugs

reply by shelley kaye on 20-Sep-2023

that makes sense on the full thoughts 😊👍

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

This was very romantic. It seemed almost set in another Era. Loved the visual of holding her face firmly but gently. Definitely a real man and a lady. Great romance and love implied. Thank you for sharing. Gretchen

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023

Thank you very much, Gretchen. It means a lot coming from you. Have a wonderful night.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from aryr

Excellent

What a fantastic free verse, Gypsy. I absolutely loved your words they were so special to me. I loved your picture because they showed that love was in the air. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.

Gypsy hugs

reply by aryr on 19-Sep-2023

Most welcome, Gypsy.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

So cool! I'm sure Barbara is thrilled by the way you are supporting her romance book! Love the two senses of blue and the beautiful illustration you chose!

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023

Yes, I like Emma and Seth.

Thank you very much for your words and review.

Love

Marival

Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

Oh my goodness what an awesome tribute to Mrs. Wilkey's fantastic read. (I have been following from the beginning!).

You do have a talent for finding the most perfect matching pictures. Great piece. Que tan bueno!!!
D

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023

Muchas Gracias, Douglas. :) yes, I follow the story too. I don't review prose except a handful I really like. I wish I had found a man like Seth when I was younger. But my men picker is broken. LoL

All the good men I meet in fanstory are taken.

I'm happy you like it. I spend more time with my presentations than my poems. I'm very picky with imagery and visual effects.

Abracitos

MariVal aka Gypsy

reply by Douglas Goff on 19-Sep-2023

MariVal. I like that. Beautiful name. The problem I have seen in my arena of life is that there are way too many good women and way too few good men. Not that there are not bad women. But, the ratio is way off. Just my observations.

Still, with a sensual enchanting mind like yours . . . You will meet that Mr Right. Keep the faith.

I like all your work by the way. Was not a lie when I said that I read everything you write. The combination colors and photos and words are quiet . . . mesmerizing.

There are only a couple others that I read everything they write. Our friend, Barbara. Susan Newell, and Terry. Not to say that I do not enjoy others, but there is only so much time.

Stay you . . . It?s a great place to be.
Good night
Douglas.