Praise and Thanksgiving
Gratitude to God for gifts in nature6 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
A lovely prayer of thanksgiving which is just right for a poem of gratitude. Great use of rhyme and assonance and a refrain of thanks to the Lord. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2023
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A lovely prayer of thanksgiving which is just right for a poem of gratitude. Great use of rhyme and assonance and a refrain of thanks to the Lord. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 23-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2023
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Thank you. I think this one is in my new book. I do love nature as God presents it and am grateful for it. (It came in second in the contest, which had very few entrants.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are filled with gratitude and thanks for the gifts God has given us in nature. This poem was wonderful to read. And I felt the joy through these words of the beauty that nature gives. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and compliments this poem well. Great Poem!
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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The author's words are filled with gratitude and thanks for the gifts God has given us in nature. This poem was wonderful to read. And I felt the joy through these words of the beauty that nature gives. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and compliments this poem well. Great Poem!
Comment Written 19-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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Thank you overmuch for a lovely review.
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent poem, which the ballad, in the same meter as amazing grace has brought before a grateful people, so is your song, could simply be put to music, with the refrain tacked on, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Suggestion : A(nd) heart filled with gratitude.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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This is an excellent poem, which the ballad, in the same meter as amazing grace has brought before a grateful people, so is your song, could simply be put to music, with the refrain tacked on, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Suggestion : A(nd) heart filled with gratitude.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Roy, for a wonderful review.
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Well done
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent poem for the challenge. I enjoyed reading it. Your presentation is very good, too. You also use descriptive words and colorful imagery that draw in a reader.
Best wishes!
Alexandra
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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This is an excellent poem for the challenge. I enjoyed reading it. Your presentation is very good, too. You also use descriptive words and colorful imagery that draw in a reader.
Best wishes!
Alexandra
Comment Written 19-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for an excellent review.
Comment from Mia Twysted
We need to show more gratitude for the world under our feet and over our heads. We have so much damage that it leaves one to wonder if we can ever repair the damage.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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We need to show more gratitude for the world under our feet and over our heads. We have so much damage that it leaves one to wonder if we can ever repair the damage.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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Thank you for an excellent review.
Comment from JSD
Beautifully done. Lovely rhythm and rhyme make for a great hymn of praise. This could easily be set to music and sung in church. Thank you for sharing this with us.
John
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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Beautifully done. Lovely rhythm and rhyme make for a great hymn of praise. This could easily be set to music and sung in church. Thank you for sharing this with us.
John
Comment Written 19-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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Thank you for your excellent review- much appreciated.
