Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

Now this is funny and sweet. It is smart and simple.
And let's not forget clever. When you have time I would like you to read my story"I Really Don't Belong Here". I wrote it before I knew folk here like things in bite-size portions. I am going to take the advice most people gave me that it needs to be a novel. It is almost 9000 words, you may need a lunch. You can tell me several things to read of yours in return.
Great poem. Karen

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2023

Thank you, Karen, I will get to that one, I am currently reading and studying "Like Momma always said" as I am learning to write prose, it will take a bit of time, as I need to understand, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 24-Sep-2023

If you don't tell me what to read I will just poke around. Karen

reply by the author on 24-Sep-2023

Sorry Karen, I know your into longer works, so may I suggest "why.. us" joining nonets, otherwise my attempts at stories go way back

Comment from Susanjohn

Excellent

Well there you go!! What a perfectly stated 15 syllable poem! Clever you! I suppose it wasn't that hard after all! ð??? nice picture to go along. Well done

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2023

Thank you very much, for some reason this one came easily (Ha! Ha!) as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This fifteen-syllable poem, My Muse Informs Me, seems to suggest that a poem that is pretty much the size of a haiku is difficult. We know that is true.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2023

Thank you Bill, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Lol. Totally agree. It's also hard to review a fifteen syllable poem, but yours made me smile. Well done, and I send you best wishes.
Wendy.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023

Thank you very much, yes, I was trying for a bit of fun, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Katie Mae Dead

Excellent

I couldn't agree with you more kahpot.
You've done a fantastic job spoofing. It gave me a laugh reading it. Thanks for writing this! Thoroughly enjoyed it and best wishes to you as well.
Luv&stuff,
Katiemaedead

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023

Thank you Katie, yes, we all need to loosen up every now and then, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

reply by Katie Mae Dead on 19-Sep-2023

You are most welcome!

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Excellent entry for the 15 Syllable Poem contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. The presentation is very nice. Good luck in the contest.

Gypsy

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023

Thank you Marival, for reviewing my bit of fun, we all need it sometimes, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Well you did it here didn't you? Ha ha ha, I love the humour here and this is a good entry for the contest, a fun post, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023

Thank you Dolly, for understanding my bit of fun, sometimes we need it, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from AP Apgar

Excellent

I like your fifteen syllable poem- good picture presentation supporting the write- muse musing - clever - it is indeed more difficult to write short poems - an economy of words requires- if I may-perhaps -It is (so) very hard to write 6/2/7? See what you think- good luck

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023

Thank you AP. for your wonderful comments and suggestions. I will check that out, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from John Ciarmello

Excellent

I'm gathering from your poem that the fourteen syllables are precisely where you wanted to go with this.

I think this is clever and out of the box. Best, JohnC

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023

Thank you JohnC. though I was aiming for and believed I achieved fifteen syllables, (po-em) this little word tricks a few, but it is two syllables, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

reply by John Ciarmello on 19-Sep-2023

I stand corrected, but it wasn't the word poem that I got hung up on, LOL. I like it even more now! Hahaha! Well done, kahpot. :)

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

it is very hard
to write
a fifteen syllable poem
and yet as Rex Harrison sad in My Fair Lady, "By George, I think she did it,
speaking of Eliza.
You did, too.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023

Thank you Tom, for your understanding comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot