Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

How true when the nets are empty. Fisherman are sad for having empty nets but to come home from the sea to their families with empty pockets.
Good presentation and words.
Best wishes,
Mary

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023

Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from aryr

Excellent

What an interesting picture from the boat on the water with the mention of sails and an interesting haiku, Gypsy. There is a flash of lightening and empty sails. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.

Gypsy hugs

reply by aryr on 19-Sep-2023

Most welcome, Gypsy.

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

ocean waves rocks <-- should be rock. if the noun is plural, no 's' on the verb; if the noun is singular, add an 's' -- i like to remember it: singular has an s, plural does not :-)
yea, i know, weird... ahh... english LOL

ocean waves
rock the boat with empty nets --
sails full of grief

great haiku with great imagery - like the empty nets part - unique.

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023

I know the rule I just made a mistake. You are right, English is weird. LoL

reply by shelley kaye on 19-Sep-2023

i figured it was an oops lol

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Hi Marival, as much as I love storms...
they are just not wanted or needed in the
ocean...not when people are in boats...
and those trying to make a living on the water...

I love your poem my sweet friend...very well
written...and I love your picture....much love
Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023

Linda,

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Love xoxo

Marival

reply by l.raven on 19-Sep-2023

always so welcome my sweet friend...
love much...xxoo 🤗🥰🌼💝🙏

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

The ocean can be so beautiful and so rewarding, though for the fishermen it can be so heartbreaking, an excellent haiku, very well written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023

It's always sad when the nets are empty and the fishermen have to return home with nothing to show for their long day of hard labor.

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

I am guessing the empty nets are symbolic of love. The rocking of the boat is agitating and makes me feel the uncertainty of life. Beautifully written. Gretchen

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023

It's always sad when the nets are empty and the fishermen have to return home with nothing to show for their long day of hard labor.

Thank you very much, Gretchen I appreciate your kind review.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

It's always sad when the nets are empty and the fishermen have to return home with nothing to show for their long day of hard labor. Lovely pictures especially that iris!

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023

You captured the meaning of this haiku perfectly. Thank you for the detailed and insightful review.

Love

Marival