2023 Gypsy's Haiku
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11 total reviews
Comment from TPAC
A provocative thought, captivating to my interests, apparently fulfilling this
poem requirements. Not certain if my suggest, will do that. I will continue. I suggest: autumn's wind glide ashes. I'm often wrong, so don't fret over my given viewpoint.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2023
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A provocative thought, captivating to my interests, apparently fulfilling this
poem requirements. Not certain if my suggest, will do that. I will continue. I suggest: autumn's wind glide ashes. I'm often wrong, so don't fret over my given viewpoint.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mary Vigasin
It is a beautiful presentation with words of imagery of ashes taken by the wind to scatter among the colors of the autumn moon.
Beautifully written Haiku,
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023
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It is a beautiful presentation with words of imagery of ashes taken by the wind to scatter among the colors of the autumn moon.
Beautifully written Haiku,
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 19-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Eternal Muse
This is absolutely gorgeous, Gypsy. A haiku at its best.
Lived the image of the harvest moon. The presentation is stunning.
Very much enjoyed the poem, thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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This is absolutely gorgeous, Gypsy. A haiku at its best.
Lived the image of the harvest moon. The presentation is stunning.
Very much enjoyed the poem, thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much. Your exceptional six stars review means a lot coming from you. Have a wonderful night.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
What a wonderful full moon haiku, Gypsy. This was beyond a doubt a strict. I enjoyed the picture of a full moon and the flowers after the poem. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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What a wonderful full moon haiku, Gypsy. This was beyond a doubt a strict. I enjoyed the picture of a full moon and the flowers after the poem. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 19-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This presentation is absolutely perfect. This presentation is an example as to why I believe you are the best poet on this site. It doesn't get any better than this. Thank you for sharing it with us.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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This presentation is absolutely perfect. This presentation is an example as to why I believe you are the best poet on this site. It doesn't get any better than this. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from JSD
Once again you turn to the staples of haiku, as one would expect. The moon, the wind, a season and some beautiful imagery of the body. Excellent work, of course.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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Once again you turn to the staples of haiku, as one would expect. The moon, the wind, a season and some beautiful imagery of the body. Excellent work, of course.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from kahpot
So many destructive fires around the earth lately, and here in AUS. it is the fire season again, along with the winds all fires can be so brutal, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
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So many destructive fires around the earth lately, and here in AUS. it is the fire season again, along with the winds all fires can be so brutal, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 18-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from GWHARGIS
I want to be cremated as well. I liked the premise of this. The imagery of the ashes as they fly on the autumn breeze. I love the mention of the harvest moon. This was such a seasonal piece. Gretchen
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
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I want to be cremated as well. I liked the premise of this. The imagery of the ashes as they fly on the autumn breeze. I love the mention of the harvest moon. This was such a seasonal piece. Gretchen
Comment Written 18-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
Well, I thought you said you wanted the ashes scattered in the ocean. But that's not us - the body is just our temporary tent for our souls. The ashes can mingle with the gorgeous harvest moon but our souls will live on with the Lord. Lovely presentation!
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
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Well, I thought you said you wanted the ashes scattered in the ocean. But that's not us - the body is just our temporary tent for our souls. The ashes can mingle with the gorgeous harvest moon but our souls will live on with the Lord. Lovely presentation!
Comment Written 18-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
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yes, the soul never dies. I do want my ashes over the ocean but for the haiku's sake, I mentioned the wind. Technically, the wind blows over the ocean too.
Thank you for reading my poem, big sister.
love,
marival
Comment from JT traveller
An extremely deep poem for me. I had to read it a number of times. For me, it was almost like you were predicting the future. it gave me chills.
Great imagery and, as always, beautifully presented. Jacqueline
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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
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An extremely deep poem for me. I had to read it a number of times. For me, it was almost like you were predicting the future. it gave me chills.
Great imagery and, as always, beautifully presented. Jacqueline
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Jacqueline. :)
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