Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This sounds dreadful, did the man die in the sea? Did he drown because he dran too much? My imagination is running riot with this write Shawn, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023

Thank you for the feedback

Comment from RodG

Excellent

You definitely make us see that can bobbing in the sea. And suddenly it's a crime scene. Do you write prose? This would be a great opener for a crime thriller when a body is discovered washing ashore. Rod

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023

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Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Welcome to FanStory, Shawn! Your have an interesting super short poem here with a crime to solve too.

Wonderfully penned and illustrated for the contest.

Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally Law :))

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023

Thank you for the feedback

reply by Sally Law on 19-Sep-2023

Most welcome!