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Trying Something Different18 total reviews
Comment from BenThrone
You express a very beautiful sentiment in this poem. I wonder, could it perhaps be related through the use of an extended narrative, with more symbols or concrete images? Your poem is your poem and at the end of the day you as its creator have to right to do with it as you wish, but since you mentioned experimenting I thought you might be open to taking a different approach.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2023
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You express a very beautiful sentiment in this poem. I wonder, could it perhaps be related through the use of an extended narrative, with more symbols or concrete images? Your poem is your poem and at the end of the day you as its creator have to right to do with it as you wish, but since you mentioned experimenting I thought you might be open to taking a different approach.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2023
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Thank you Ben, I thought of that, but I am not very good with punctuation as such, so I would leave it alone, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from harmony13
I liked the poem a lot! It is uplifting, spiritual and creative. I pondered
on these words and liked how the author describes Life! I thought about how life can be difficult but as the author states it is "a daily gift"! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome!
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2023
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I liked the poem a lot! It is uplifting, spiritual and creative. I pondered
on these words and liked how the author describes Life! I thought about how life can be difficult but as the author states it is "a daily gift"! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome!
Comment Written 20-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2023
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from grace l kelly
short but sweet. i love the simplicity of it. i give thanks every day for what have in my life and this reminds to do just that. best wishes to you and yours.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2023
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short but sweet. i love the simplicity of it. i give thanks every day for what have in my life and this reminds to do just that. best wishes to you and yours.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Boogienights
This is a very nice way of looking at life. Everyone should have your positive altitude, the world would be a better place. We should all be grateful for what we have, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2023
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This is a very nice way of looking at life. Everyone should have your positive altitude, the world would be a better place. We should all be grateful for what we have, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Wendy G
Very nice. And also true. It is certainly our most valued possession, unable to be bought, and each day we unwrap with appreciation and gratitude. Thank you for sharing your thoughtfully written poem.
Wendy
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2023
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Very nice. And also true. It is certainly our most valued possession, unable to be bought, and each day we unwrap with appreciation and gratitude. Thank you for sharing your thoughtfully written poem.
Wendy
Comment Written 20-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2023
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Thank you so very much for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Eternal Muse
These are beautiful words, and I love your theme and presentation.
True words of wisdom. Absolutely loved your orange font.
Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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These are beautiful words, and I love your theme and presentation.
True words of wisdom. Absolutely loved your orange font.
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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Thank you for your wonderful and encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and nice presentation, kahpot.
-I don't think you need any help.
-You have chosen a good topic and
share good examples of what that means to you.
-I like the image, "a daily gift," and you make
a good point that it is not something that
you can buy or sell. A good point at the end
that translates to "use it wisely."
-A very good poem!!!
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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-Good artwork and nice presentation, kahpot.
-I don't think you need any help.
-You have chosen a good topic and
share good examples of what that means to you.
-I like the image, "a daily gift," and you make
a good point that it is not something that
you can buy or sell. A good point at the end
that translates to "use it wisely."
-A very good poem!!!
Comment Written 19-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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Thank you so very much for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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You are very welcome.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Kym,
This free verse poem show you have the true and good philosophy on life.
We should all view each day as a gift and an adventure.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a good evening
Joan
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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Hi Kym,
This free verse poem show you have the true and good philosophy on life.
We should all view each day as a gift and an adventure.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a good evening
Joan
Comment Written 19-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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Thank you Joan, for your wonderful and encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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You?re most welcome, Kym.
Joan
Comment from karenina
It's moments like this then I think "free" verse is priceless! This is such a grateful offering put out into the universe! A mantra each of us would benefit from repeating with every new dawn! Yes...let us slowly unwrap and savor the joy and peace of each moment!
Karenina
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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It's moments like this then I think "free" verse is priceless! This is such a grateful offering put out into the universe! A mantra each of us would benefit from repeating with every new dawn! Yes...let us slowly unwrap and savor the joy and peace of each moment!
Karenina
Comment Written 19-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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Hello and thank you Karenina, I am very happy with the response for this one, free verse is not my normal (first one I think) I do hope you are doing well****kahpot
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Free Verse likes your quill! Do not let it be a stranger!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I adore this write, you should have entered this into a contest and I would love to put this on the wall in my house, fine inventive words of wisdom, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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I adore this write, you should have entered this into a contest and I would love to put this on the wall in my house, fine inventive words of wisdom, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 19-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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Wow! thank you so very much for your wonderful and encouraging comments, and the six stars, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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Well deserved, a fine post x
