Scenes at a Third Party
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Comment from Brett Matthew West
Making people feel irritated with each other a unique power to possess. The fun one could have with that. Will be interesting to see how this scene wraps up.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023
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Making people feel irritated with each other a unique power to possess. The fun one could have with that. Will be interesting to see how this scene wraps up.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023
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Thanks. Brett. I anticipate twenty scenes.
Comment from BethShelby
This thing is turning into a couples thing. Betty should have been there when Ned passed on. Now he is more confused than ever. I can't wait to hear what he thinks of his experience with DED. It looks GED doesn't appreciate being kissed by Zora and they're trading insults.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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This thing is turning into a couples thing. Betty should have been there when Ned passed on. Now he is more confused than ever. I can't wait to hear what he thinks of his experience with DED. It looks GED doesn't appreciate being kissed by Zora and they're trading insults.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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I am pawning this disrespectful behavior off on D-red, who was despicable in life and is now the agent of death of insects and vermin.
Comment from BethShelby
This thing is turning into a couples thing. Betty should have been there when Ned passed on. Now he is more confused than ever. I can't wait to hear what he thinks of his experience with DED. It looks GED doesn't appreciate being kissed by Zora and they're trading insults.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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This thing is turning into a couples thing. Betty should have been there when Ned passed on. Now he is more confused than ever. I can't wait to hear what he thinks of his experience with DED. It looks GED doesn't appreciate being kissed by Zora and they're trading insults.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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I am pawning this disrespectful behavior off on D-red, who was despicable in life and is now the agent of death of insects and vermin.
Comment from Ulla
Hahahaha, Bill, you are just taking the piss out of every single politician. It is so funny and so, so very refreshing against what is going on in the real world. I will be looking out for more. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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Hahahaha, Bill, you are just taking the piss out of every single politician. It is so funny and so, so very refreshing against what is going on in the real world. I will be looking out for more. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 19-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Ulla. It's hard to top political reality.
Comment from nomi338
I do not know how you are keeping track of all the goings and comings in this story. Right now, I am having to consult my crib notes often to keep up. My hat is off to you, or it would be if I had a hat. LOL.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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I do not know how you are keeping track of all the goings and comings in this story. Right now, I am having to consult my crib notes often to keep up. My hat is off to you, or it would be if I had a hat. LOL.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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What's this here? Oh, a hat.
Comment from JSD
More surreal craziness. Loving every moment. Thank you for continuing to share this strange script. Will we get to an election? I shudder to imagine these people actually in charge!
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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More surreal craziness. Loving every moment. Thank you for continuing to share this strange script. Will we get to an election? I shudder to imagine these people actually in charge!
Comment Written 19-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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Marjorie Taylor Greene or George Santos. Which one would want over these characters?
Comment from kahpot
Hi, Bill, I found this chapter a bit confusing, (for me) a bit too much back and forth, with characters talking in more than one scene, I can image Ned coming back from the Bleechers, after his near miss****kahpot
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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Hi, Bill, I found this chapter a bit confusing, (for me) a bit too much back and forth, with characters talking in more than one scene, I can image Ned coming back from the Bleechers, after his near miss****kahpot
Comment Written 19-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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I?m sorry, kahpot. I have been ping ponging between the DEF and ??? and the Third Party.
Comment from lyenochka
Ah! Now we see the culprit behind all the spats in each car and the campaign staff. It is D-red, naturally. But how is he able to dial a phone and is he talking to MauMau?
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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Ah! Now we see the culprit behind all the spats in each car and the campaign staff. It is D-red, naturally. But how is he able to dial a phone and is he talking to MauMau?
Comment Written 19-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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You?ll have to suspend your disbelief even further, Helen. That?s what I do.
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Ah, you and Samuel Coleridge!
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Who is D-red? He has a talent. With the crazy election going on, you have a lot of materials to write about. Please add more substances which is not what you are doing here.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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Who is D-red? He has a talent. With the crazy election going on, you have a lot of materials to write about. Please add more substances which is not what you are doing here.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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The characters are well-known to Pons and Ned readers, Lisa. I will try to catch you up, as they stretch over ten years.